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RituparnaBhowmik

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Hello! Who Are You?

    the poem is truly [ uhm... ] revealing. i like the flow , and u really are wise. hey will you answer to this personal question- are you really 9? ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Teen Fiction Re: You Can't Buy Me

    this poem is absolutely wonderful, i practically see no flaws to correct and this is the first time i am saying this, i love the use of pun in the ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: in which two people fall out of love

    you ought to be proud the work is just great.simple neat and full of emotions. i just suggest you could probably change the title to " make hay while the ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the princes of peonage

    The poem is really a great work. i am not an american so my review is not dealing with any patriotic sentiments, i don't intend to hurt anyone's feelings. i ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The dream of a song...

    the poem is beautiful. i really love your lyrical style and your expression of love. it leaves me very small portion to nitpick however it came to my notice that ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Optimistic Lens.

    i like the optimistic tone in this poem [lol]. keeping the fuss apart i really like this piece, it is charged with positivity which is one of the things i ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: if the streets touch the sky

    I frankly love the poem. i really like it. i notably like the use of science in the poem myself being a science student i never though it could be ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: moby celeste

    the poem is a fine work , superbly spun and the suspense is well maintained.i love the work and this is one of the finest poem that i am about ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: thirst

    this is really a fine piece and i like the language and words making it sound more real. the poem really excited me am i was too engrosses. but i ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Even when I am dead

    really beautiful poem... i have already told you my review on it but i don't mind to repeat. the poem is beautiful and express true love which is hard to ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Vice Verses

    the poem gives a good message and is simple in delivering it. i would like to do some nitpick i think the work "hoe" in line 27 show have been ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hi. Have we met?

    wow.. that was a great poem smooth flowing and it appeals to the reader. i like the story like set up and the work in the [] expressing yous thoughts ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love's Challenges

    this poem is filled with emotions and is really romantic, the last stanza specifically is a eye catch. as i read from the previous review this was your first work ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Bubble of Water

    the poem is a collage of emotions and a great work. it is realistic and also teaches now to derive the best. i like the flow in the poem and ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Warrior of Troy

    the poem created a story like atmosphere and i recommend your brief and precise description. the literal sense is not too rich but portraying hard emotions though easy words is ...

    Mar 11, 2015


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