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Hey. I loved this. I'm completely overlooking all the errors, because you mentioned something about them already. Also, because I was one of these people who need courage. And I ...

Hey. Okay, this is good, but I'm one of the not-shy-people. Lol I don't know but, people like me don't really do that. Well, some may do it, but your ...

Heyy. WOAH. Haha I just loved this stuff. I mean, the title itself got me interested :) and just a typo in this line, "love and kindness with come your ...

Hey. I liked this composition a lot. Honestly, it's the truth of the present world and scenario. The understanding here is so not prevalent these days, something that has to ...

Hey. Did it just please me a lot? Yes, it did. :) The repetition here focused on how the writer is actually, genuinely trying to help out and empathizes with ...

Heyyy.. Okay, I loved this poem, mainly because it describes what almost all of us go through. The topic you chose wasn't so different, but the way you wrote it ...

Heyy. Yay I liked it :D I The repetition here was quite cool. But there's something that I think didn't quite fit in. If you actually think from a killer's ...

Hey. I think you need to check your first paragraph, there are a few typos. Secondly, your dialogues do not have question marks wherever required. Just a few things I ...

Hey. Okay, first off, use proper punctuation and language. You've used too many spaces. Secondly, your write up was something we all know about, the topic was not intriguing. I ...

Hey there. Your topic was REALLY good. The content was also very good, but it seemed a bit slow. Like it didn't have the basic element of writing. Okay well, ...

Hey. I enjoyed this poem a lot. I liked the imagery used here and the way you described musical notes. The waiter part, added to it and made it more ...

Hey. This was great AND it somehow reminded me of the Hunger Games forest xD But that's good. No glitches, because I didn't look hard. Make readers love your composition, ...

Hey. Yay to the title alliteration. :D Great job. Talking of birds, is not something people usually write of. These days, they're more involved in sadistic things. Fantasies, etc. etc. ...

Hey. First off, I think the line "It doesn't mean you to forget." wasn't correct. It's just not correct language-wise. Secondly, "All the pain that has cost you all." maybe ...

Heyy.. Okay so in the first line, "One year later, in the same bench we meet." I think it should be, "One year later, on the same bench we met." ...