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Hey. Okay so, this was Too Good, with caps. I mean, it's a doll, a normal doll, but the depth here can't be ignored. It's clear what you've done here. ...

Hey hey hey. You just proved that every choppy poem needn't be senseless (because people do criticize on that factor) I just loved it. TOTALLY. Just too good. It's like, ...

Hey. Lol what even.. xD Okay this was really awesome, cool idea. I loved the whole thing, the title got me into it so.. And obviously, no glitches in your ...

Hey. Okay so, I loved it. It's sorta relatable. I mean, really really good job. Second thing, why don't you use punctuation? Would be better, right? :) And of course, ...

Hey. Was it a broken soul? Or a bird? Or a plane? xD Anyways, different people, different views, I liked it a lot :D Honestly, don't make compositions too choppy, ...

Hey. Okay so. ""Where is Craig?" I asked. Mom looked the other way and pretended like she didn't hear me. "Mom, answer me." I tell her, at this point I ...

Hey. Firstly, I totally disagree with the other reviews, this was perfect in its own way. And not every poem needs to be in stanzas. Secondly, punctuation could be taken ...

Hey. Short and meaningful, loved it! Now, no glitches of course. Just tell me, what exactly does this thing mean? There are so many explanations to it, I just wanna ...

Hey. Okay so, you just voiced out what millions of young writers feel :D "The heartbeat of words—a sound I’d forgot" I think it should be "The heartbeat of words- ...

Hey. Good topic, enjoyed it a lot. The rhyme scheme confused me a bit in the middle, but then, that's the way you want it to be :) And it's ...

Hey there. Yes, I liked the concept of lesbians here. I liked how you brought it up, something that doesn't have to be judged, something that cannot be controlled, something ...

Hey. I'm I actually reviewing this? You left me confused lol, and you forgot spaces twice. :P But whatever, I liked it, but it changed patterns almost suddenly, the emotion ...

Hey. Oh my god, did you just voice out what each poet feels? :p Well, you did a great job out of it. And I see, you've cleverly done things, ...

Heyya. Omg whaaaa, this was great and you confused me like, woahh. I had to read it twice to simply understand the whole thing. I mean, how did you even ...

WOAHHHH. I.Am.Amazed. Okay, so I found out a few typos, but I won't point those out. Your story was just awesome. How did you get such an idea? The way ...