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Hey. Okay, good topic, good content and here comes the hats off!! I found no technical glitches at all. But the pace was all too slow and steady, make it ...

Hey. At first I thought it was just another "rainy poem" but nooo, this was good :D The ending was amazing, the beginning was a bit loose, but you caught ...

Hey. Story line was good. I thought the middle was kinda lost or something. Because honestly, I wanted to stop reading in the middle itself. Make the dialogues more interesting, ...

Hey there. I think it was a really good biography. Like, people tend to add in their own opinions, elements, acts etc. which is not appropriate for biographies and you ...

Hey there. First off, great poem. Secondly, I loved how you expressed things here, imagery did its charm. IT was a pleasure to read of course. Honestly, I felt this ...

Hey. Okay so, you came up with something different, good job :D And your last stanza haha. No technical errors as such but why don't you take this a bit ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS :D Okay is this like, a rough skeleton? Umm, there's a typo in your first paragraph. Then, I liked your description, I found some imagery. Then, ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS, first of all :D I liked this, good poem (first try?) "The olive branch dove" is this relevant to this? I don't think so. Add some ...

Hey. Short and awesome. I liked how you just used two words to simply express deep meanings, good job on that. I didn't find any glitches as such but I ...

Hey there. Okay so, the first thing I noticed were the punctuation errors. Secondly, it was short but meaningful, good job on that. And again, I would've loved it if ...

Hey. Yes, I liked this poem, I liked how different it was, I liked how you diverted your direction from most of the YWS poems I've read and I loved ...

Heyy. "But I don’t know the first think about writing a song," shouldn't it be "thing" here? I know it's just a typo, but whatevs. "But you don’t deserve it" ...

Hey. 2009?? This is soo sooo soooo old, but nonetheless, it's awesome :P I mean it. Genuinely. It's a kiddie poem (by your age that time?) and it's kinda the ...

Hey. Oh god, this thing tickled me so much. And on top of that, I loved how it sounded haha. I understand it's purely fiction, but lol, what if someone ...

Hey. Umm, I liked the idea, the whole concept. But it's too used up now, use something unique. And I think it wouldn't bring readers to literally care for the ...