Rascalover

Hey Sugar! these are absolutely wonderful, and the only critique I can give is that you pull them as separate pieces of work, that can co-exist. Poets like Rupi Kaur ...

Hello Sugar! This piece, i can tell hits close to home, so I'll try to gently critique a mix of context and content. Big hugs if you've felt this personally. ...

Hey! I'm here to review! First i am going to point out some grammar mistakes, and then I'll give an overall opinion of this small introductory piece. The comma after ...

Hey! I don't really have a review, but I am curious. The story eludes that the young man is mentally delayed by the way he speaks and how he describes ...

Hey, I am not sure if this is a piece of work or if you are just venting. So, this isn't really a review, but I would like for you ...

Hey! I absolutely love the imagery I get from the descriptions you have written out. I love the rhythm and beat of this poem, and I don't really have much ...

Hey! Here for a review. This piece is so small and simple, and that is my favorite thing about this piece. I would love if the seven days told a ...

Hey! I love the message in this! I think the lack of punctuation and grammar goes well with this message of being almost enough but not perfect, so I can't ...

Hey! I am not going to review this piece for grammar and such because it seems like you are just venting and needed an audience to listen and talk to. ...

Hey! Happy to be here to review! Hope I don't offend, and remember everything I say is just an opinion, this is your master piece, and if you like it ...

Hey! So, I'm not sure if this really needs a review. I will say that it seems very whimsical almost like Dr. Seuss. I don't think I have seen a ...

Hey! Wow! Not only do you create wonderful poetry, but you are a masterful story teller! I literally don't know if I would change anything about this poem, except maybe ...

Hey! Thanks for requesting a review! I definitely enjoy your work! You are a very talented writer! There should be a semi-colon after disappeared instead of a comma. There should ...

Hey! Thanks for requesting a few reviews! This piece also has quite a few reviews, so I don't know how helpful mine can be, but I'll try! :) I think ...

Hey! Thanks for asking for a few reviews! I think this piece is unique in it's execution, and i enjoyed reading it. I see you have a lot of reviews ...