Hi Libby, it's Jade (duh) here to randomly review something by you, I'm probably going to make you cringe. Okay, let's start.
Day one was short, simple, straight to the point, though to be honest, maybe some sort of metaphor instead would be more practical, or something along those lines?
Day two does go hand in hand with day one, and it made me smile, which is what I think you went for.
Day three, so eloquent, so well put. No, seriously, for a poem I think you may want to expand on why you put it like this or be more specific.
Day four is also random. I know it's a daily thing, and I'm very sure it's real, but maybe it leading up to something would be more beneficial.
Day five, maybe substitute the second cooked to something else, cleaned, wrote, i don't know.
Day six is relatable.
Day seven, I think T.V. should be capitalized.
Overall, a cute poem, though it's hard to take it seriously. I'm doing this for fun and I just wanted to offer some critiques so if you want the points just ask. I doubt you care about it now but I hope I helped and if you can't tell, your writing has gotten so much better ^^