Ranay333

hi, I just wanted to apologize ahead of time but this got a laugh out of me. It has a lot of emotion and from what you're saying it seems ...

hi, This has a nice flow and I can relate to what your feeling. A lot of the time when you can't find inspiration to write something or think of ...

Great job! I'm very impressed. When I read this I was curious as to what got you inspired to write it. Believe it or not you aren't the only on ...

Hello, I'm Ranay: You chose the correct set of words and grouped them together really well. The feeling from this poem was overwhelming even though it was short and had ...

hello, I'm Ranay: If you went through this I hope things got better but I just wanted to say we all go through this one time or another. It's a ...

Hello, I'm Ranay: When I was younger at one time I felt like this mentally even though I was healthy physically. But when I read this it brought me back ...

Hello, I'm Ranay I agree with Morrigan on her review as well. You chose the right words to put together and with how their grouped they give off the feeling ...

Hello, I'm Ranay I was greatly impressed with this. You turned the subject into your own twist of things and it showed a lot of deep meaning. When you talked ...

I can't relate to this that well but crushes aren't simple. Though the crushes now days are just out of admiration. But i agree with katyaelefant. You do have to ...

To be honest I'm not quite sure how to put in words on what I felt when I read this. Even though it's just a short story you put great ...

Hi kanome, I'm Ranay. Just wanted to say a few things. Even though this is a short peom there's definitley potential behind it. It's very emotional and deep but has ...

When I imagined all of this while reading it was quite interesting. While I was imagining this, I thought you could almost turn it into a short story or even ...

After just reading the first paragraph I got hitched. When I read this I was able to imagine every single detail of the event. You did extremely well explaining the ...

To have written this on a whim it's very impressive. Whether it was written on a whim or not you can tell it does have some meaning behind it. In ...

This poem definitley shows your point of view society in the present and how strong your opinion is. Though, I do agree with you. You never know when you'll see ...