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Hi Jenna :) Beautiful poem you have here! I feel a lot of emotion coming off this. I love the way you composed this piece. I have a few suggestions ...

Hello Nargles! I love your poem! One thing I would suggest is you look at the line: Forever stuck between light and dark And try to make it fit with ...

Beautiful poem, Luckystar! I only have a few small suggestions... First of all, I suggest you make it into stanzas somewhat like this...Also I have some edits/suggestions in ()'s. Whispering ...

Here is my edited version, it is just my suggestions.\ ------------------------------------------------------ Legs splayed, skin flayed, i'm Clutching these fallen feathers to my bosom, crafting crutc

Hey Phantom! I liked this poem, but I have a few suggestions. First of all, you need to think more about punctuation For example, Of course I can Can’t you ...

I love the story in this! It was kindof hard to read through, I would suggest you try and focus on a bit more rhyming. I like that this poem ...

The gong of clashing wills prevails The trembling voices shake the walls The crooked table legs, the veil The ancient photograph, the loss (This stanza is okay, but the rhyming ...

Wow, this sends a really strong message. I really like the story, how you put this all together. The only thing I think you might want to look at again ...

Hello! You have an interesting poem here. For rhyming, I think you are doing okay, but I don't know what you where going for here. It flows okay when I ...

This one is amazing! The rhyming is wonderful! It flows very easy and is 100% easy to read. It tells a good story, and it ends on a beautiful note. ...

Beautiful! I have a few suggestions, though: ---------------------------------- A silver path is trailed with lace It leads me to a better place Overhead the sky is blue The flowers bloom ...

Awesome :) I agree, we are all insane. My review: ---------------------------------------------- On the first stanza, "What is logic? And reason?" I say to you. Do you think, "What is logic? ...

I love it :) It has a very nice rhythm to it, its a lovely poem that is easy to read. I do think it ends to soon, like something ...

Hey Wolf :3 My edits are in ()'s. -------------------------------------------------------- A dragons laugh, so sweet, so true, (nothing to say here!) A dragons laugh, like the star, guiding us home, f

Here are my comments on your poem... They are in parentheses()'s. ---------------------------------------- Would you believe me? If I told you(,) That there was something more(?) It's hiding in everyt