Raindeer

Hi, there! Rain for a short review! :) Nitpicks first, shall we? :D The hot wined pikes up all the brown broken sticks and cares them a way. Not quite ...

Hey, there, dogs! Let's do chapter 16 first, and then we'll go on to 17. Chapter 16 The first thing I noticed was the change in the perspective. Make sure ...

Hey, there! Rain here for a short review >3< I really liked this story. It was a nice twist on the whole Hunger Games thing, haha. Very gruesome stuff indeed. ...

Hi, dogs! Here for a quick review - Winter pretty much hit home with everything I was going to say so I'm just going to go in a little farther ...

Wow! This was absolutely inspirational. From the title, I just thought it'd be some list of random things you want to do in the future, but I really love the ...

Oh my gods. That was... horrifying. And slightly funny. But mostly horrifying. And disgusting. Nitpicks first~ But who's second cousin doesn't poop on onions these days? 1) mine don't (I ...

Hi, there! (I'm on my phone so sorry for any errors!) Here we goo~ There was a nice meaning behind this poem and it was very elegant and beautiful! I ...

Hi, there! (I'm on my phone so I apologize for any stupid auto-correcting). I'm going to start off with just pointing out a few nitpicky things that irked me. For ...

Hi, there! Rain here for a quick review. I don't have much to say here, but here we goo~ One little nitpick I found: If my life was a poem, ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS~ I really enjoyed this. I'm going to start of with nitpicks~ "Yeah...sorry I listened in. Your just really good." *You're "Ok, class, settle down, we've ...

I'm not sure how you want me to review this, so I'm just going to dive in, give a few of my thoughts, and leave (it's so short that I ...

Haha. c: This is cute - weird, maybe, but it's goofy and silly and... cute. It could use some polishing up, but I'm not sure if you actually do want ...

Hi there! Again, haha. Happy Review Day!^^ Okay, so, I haven't read the reviews below me so I'm sorry if I accidentally repeat something. >.< There are quite a few ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! I really enjoyed this, because Rapunzel is cool and so is Disney and woop. I really liked the ending - it was smooth, and nothing was ...

Hi! Here for a short review this time. I applaud you for the prophecy! It was awesome - you did a nice job with the same "voice" of words in ...