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  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Realistic Re: My 6th Grade Story...

    Hey, there! Rain here for a short review >3< I really liked this story. It was a nice twist on the whole Hunger Games thing, haha. Very gruesome stuff indeed. ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Never Forget You

    Hi, dogs! Here for a quick review - Winter pretty much hit home with everything I was going to say so I'm just going to go in a little farther ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: My Bucket List

    Wow! This was absolutely inspirational. From the title, I just thought it'd be some list of random things you want to do in the future, but I really love the ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Top Five Things More Disgusting Than Pooping on an Onion

    Oh my gods. That was... horrifying. And slightly funny. But mostly horrifying. And disgusting. Nitpicks first~ But who's second cousin doesn't poop on onions these days? 1) mine don't (I ...

    Oct 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Love and hatred

    Hi, there! (I'm on my phone so sorry for any errors!) Here we goo~ There was a nice meaning behind this poem and it was very elegant and beautiful! I ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Screw money!

    Hi, there! (I'm on my phone so I apologize for any stupid auto-correcting). I'm going to start off with just pointing out a few nitpicky things that irked me. For ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If My Life Were a Novel. . .

    Hi, there! Rain here for a quick review. I don't have much to say here, but here we goo~ One little nitpick I found: If my life was a poem, ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Forgotten: Chapter 1-The Transfer Student

    Hello there! Welcome to YWS~ I really enjoyed this. I'm going to start of with nitpicks~ "Yeah...sorry I listened in. Your just really good." *You're "Ok, class, settle down, we've ...

    Oct 4, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Hey, Artemis28

    I'm not sure how you want me to review this, so I'm just going to dive in, give a few of my thoughts, and leave (it's so short that I ...

    Oct 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Pickles are life

    Haha. c: This is cute - weird, maybe, but it's goofy and silly and... cute. It could use some polishing up, but I'm not sure if you actually do want ...

    Oct 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I thought she was my friend, but instead she is a bully.

    Hi there! Again, haha. Happy Review Day!^^ Okay, so, I haven't read the reviews below me so I'm sorry if I accidentally repeat something. >.< There are quite a few ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Dear Rapunzel

    Hi! Happy Review Day! I really enjoyed this, because Rapunzel is cool and so is Disney and woop. I really liked the ending - it was smooth, and nothing was ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The New Generation--Chapter Three: Thea and a Poem

    Hi! Here for a short review this time. I applaud you for the prophecy! It was awesome - you did a nice job with the same "voice" of words in ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The New Generation--Chapter Two: Making Friends

    Hi! Here again. I'm probably going to read and review all the chapters after this (up until 5), and if I don't I'll just be reading them. But, I will ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The New Generation--Chapter Five: Going on a Quest

    Hello, Happy Review Day! Percy Jackson is my life... so, I'm here to review. (I'm going to read the chapters before this after I finish this review, and then I'll ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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