-
Re: Nightmare
Hey there, glad to see you posted something :D I get to review it! First off, I love vampires! Not the Edward/Bella kind, the kind that actually bite people. I ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Woman
Dude! You're an amazing poet! I'm going through your work right now and it just blows my mind! This poem, for example, is so soft and sweet yet it overflows ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: operation imperial [prologue]
Rishabh, I liked this as a prologue. It does what prologues are supposed to do ----> offer some information to the reader and get their interest in the story so ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Lugnut's Lullaby
Hey InkBlot! Me again, with another review! Firstly, I've let you know how good you are with emotions. You're really good with emotions. There. The relationship between these two characters ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Solomon's Tower Chapter one
Hey there! I was just browsing and came across your chapter :-) Okay, first off, I wanna commend you for taking on the task of writing a story that has ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Morning Dew
Hey there! I'd like to review this one! :-D First off, you need to know that you are very talented at describing things. Your images were very vivid, beautiful, and ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: My Subconscious Journey
Hey there! A small review for you, if you don't mind :-) This journey into your subconscious is breathtaking. That is the only word I can think of that would ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of a Cat Fanatic- Chapter 1
Heya! I've got a review for this! The first thing I wanna say is: LOL! This was hilarious. It was funny, but at the same time it was possible to ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Flower Girl
Hello there. I don't know how I'm going to review this poem without saying anything the others have already said. Okay. So, I've decided I'll just tell you how awesome ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Conflict
Hey there! I just happened to stumble across this one and it just blew my mind! I'm going through a Game of Thrones phase right now, so I totally got ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Occupational Hazard
Hello there, I'm here to offer a review on this story. I liked the plot of your story, at least what I've read so far (I'm assuming that this is ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: The Land Of The Free
Hello there, I've got a review for this poem :-) Firstly, I've gotta commend you for taking on a poem with this theme. More poems like this should be written. ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Close to the Fire
Hello, I know it's been awhile since you posted this but it's awesome and I still wanna review it. Firstly, I gotta tell you about that opening line: "It's so ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: The Dead Toreador
Hello there :-) I know this painting, and I've just gotta say that this poem is almost a mirror for that piece of art. It's beautifully done and almost seems ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: No Sharp Edges
Hi there, I wanna offer a review :-) First off, I've got to congratulate you on creating such a remarkably well-developed narrator. Lyn is an amazing character and she is ...
Jun 19, 2013
