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Dude! You're an amazing poet! I'm going through your work right now and it just blows my mind!
This poem, for example, is so soft and sweet yet it overflows with a mesmerizing sense of strength. Those opening lines: "I want a woman / who drifts soft as pollen" may be the most memorable opening lines I've read since I joined this site. It's so subtle and imbued with such beauty!
I also love the way your persona establishes that he wants complete unity with the woman in an effort to show the level of intimacy/passion/love that he expects. This is truly a great poem.
Best wishes, and keep writing
This is really beautiful. I have a lot of respect for this poem, and your style.