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Re: We love too fast and learn too slow
Hello, Tenyo! Rachel here to review. :) Wow. Like....wow. It took me a second to conjure up a review for this piece; it left me speechless. Such raw passion and ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: How Society Views Me
Hey rothwise! Rachel here to review! :) This is so cute. When I say "cute," I don't mean that in a condescending way... I mean "cute" as in you're addressing ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: That Other World
My, oh my. Great piece here, Rothwise! I found no grammar or spelling errors, which is great. One wouldn't think that a poem about reading could be so passionate! I ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: This was me.
Hello, Nike! Rachel here to review. :) You've written a very relatable piece here. As a girl close to your age, I understand that whole "I'm getting old, why are ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: A Quiet Encounter
Hello, Noni! Rachel here to review! :) I want to start off by saying that this is a very pretty piece you've written. The word choice was great, and the ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: The Fate Of All Is Always Dust
Hello NightWolf! Rachel here to review! :) Wow, this is really a beautiful piece you've written here. Honestly. I have nothing bad to say about this poem. Your rhyme scheme ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: The fragile paper and a broken promise
Hello, there. Rachel here to review! :) Let me start off by saying this: the short length of this poem makes it hard to understand. It has no back story... ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: No More
Hello, there! Rachel here to review! :) I wanna start by saying that though the repetition is blatant, it's a big strength in this piece. This poem is so fiercely ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: 'End of Year' Poem
Hello there! Rachel here to review. :) This is a cute little poem you've made! However, I think throughout the poem, it seems like you're trying too hard to make ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Palindrome Poem #1
Hello there! Rachel here to review! :) This is great. Palindrome poems are really tricky, but you've done really well with this one. I especially love these lines: Soon Spring ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: What are you afraid of?
Hello there! Rachel here to review. :) I like this piece you've written here! This is some deep stuff you've written. I can't find anything wrong with this. You've captured ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: I need to kill.
Hello there! Rachel here to review! :) I really like this piece you've written. Though it's written about such a barbaric and crude subject, it's very thought provoking. I like ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Devastation in Tears
My, oh my. This is a lovely poem. Seriously: this is very emotional and strongly written. For a change, I'm just going to go through and highlight my favorite parts ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: The Girl and the Bird
Hello! I'm back to review another one of your pieces! :) This is a lovely, sweet poem you've written here. I like the idea of the girl being mute, therefore ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Why Fear Is Worse Than Greed
Hello, there! Rachel here to review! :) I like the concept you've created here. It's good "food for thought." However, I found part of this a little confusing. This is ...
Dec 23, 2013
