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Re: The Bus Ride.
This was a really different poem but I really like what is going on right now and with what I can see I am going to go by lines to ...
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: Shipwreck
This is a really good poem and I really think that there isn't a lot to complain about. First I would like to say that you are a really good ...
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: A Part-time Bucketmaker
This is PusheenTheCat here to write a review and today I am going to be telling you about your story by stanzas. First: "' He is standing on the sidewalk ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Shadows of the Night
This was a really good poem and I am going to tell you what to do better with each stanza. First: "' Do you see the falling snow? As pure ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: The Devil Elixir.
Wow this is a really good but I am here to help you with what you need to work on. I really like the way you said everything and how ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Wanderer
I am here to write another review and I am going by stanzas. First: "'Time will tell all these things that I have done. Watered down or swollen, the feet ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: 12:52 pm
This is really good and what I would like to say about it is that you are so specific. I don't want to know that. JK First I would say ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: I Was Wrong
This was a really good poem and I really think that you could do a lot with what you are doing right now. First I would like to say that ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Arsonist
Wow that was something I am PusheenTheCat and today I am going to be writing a review for you. First I would like to say that this was really good ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: My Parallel
This is PusheenTheCat and today I am going to write a review for you. First I would like to say is that your poem really goes together and makes everything ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Goldfish
This is one of those story's that just takes over your body and just wants you to keep reading. Today I will be going by stanza's. "'Swim right, swim left. ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: A Letter To Myself
._. this story just made me go crazy on the inside everything was put together so well. I would like to say a few things about this story before I ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Dwarf
This is a really good poem because it makes some scene and most of your poems are not the same as this one because it makes scene and I really ...
Dec 1, 2016 -
Re: The Sun
Wow. I really like this poem. One of the reasons that I like this poem is because it is really about things that happen in real life because without the ...
Dec 1, 2016 -
Re: Supernovae
First off I would like to say that I am really happy for you getting your 6th star, I don't know how you did it but I am really impressed ...
Dec 1, 2016