PoeticGlow

This is a good piece, Cailey! Use of simple words or not, this poem was broken down very nicely! Good job! :) My favorite lines were these: "The rose’s thorns ...

This is a pretty good poem, leeanna13097! However, just a few suggestions: try to go for some punctuation, because it's difficult to get the full effect of your poem without ...

This is great, Anwesha! Your diction is simply wonderful here! My favorite lines are these: "A flowing river of dreadful thoughts, An endless string of things I sought, but never ...

I like this, livurdestiny! It clearly shows who your real friends/enemies! My favorite part is this line: "Friends will pick you up once you fall but Best Friends- Will push ...

This is pretty intense, jknudsen! Here's a few suggestions though: "Tattoos cover my body, recognition of my sorrow, Sadly , it's time to let go... (add a comma after sadly) ...

Touching poem, KelsRich1! This is very reminiscent of Kelly Clarkson's song, "Breakaway"; I like how this poem reminds me of it! I see you already fixed your punctuation errors, so ...

Hey KatTrain, this poem was pretty intense! These lines gripped me the most: "Daddy, I don't know what to do anymore, my tears hold silent congress on the floor, they ...

Hey there, Flower~Child! Overall, I really enjoyed this piece! What stood out for me in particular though was this stanza: "I listen to the invisible clock waiting for the minute ...

Allie, this is a very cute poem! The rhyme scheme is well executed, and the message you're conveying is something I can truly admire! I actually think that this poem ...

A simple piece, but very, very heartfelt! I like the reassurance you give yourself at the end of the poem: "My dreams. They will keep on living, After my time." ...

Hello, dreamsingray! Overall, I think this a nice little poem! I find the length appropriate and a universal message that everyone can relate to! However, my only criticism is in ...

This poem is very refreshing! I like it a lot! However, the only problem I see are the random parts in your stanzas where you randomly un-capitalize words at the ...

This poem is very reminiscent of a dream! Your word choices were absolutely perfect, and your flow was flawless! My favorite lines were these: "Then I break through, and see ...

This is a very profound poem! Dark, too! That's what I enjoy reading the most! :) My favorite lines were these: "It's such a mournful sound, and death creeps in ...

MissRockers, this is a wonderfully crafted poem! The flow, rhyme scheme, appearance--EVERYTHING was perfectly executed! I honestly have nothing to point out! "Every day of the week she puts on ...