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Re: wait and see
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Wow, this is your first work? You should go look at mine. don't you dare! it's awful. For the first work you've posted this ...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: 1.2.15
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, this is kinda short. You might want to kind something to add onto it. Like what happened that made him want to drink? ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: The Doll
Heya, Chrissy here for the shortest review in the history of YWS. All I have to say, what happened to the girl? I assume she's dead, but how did she ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Northern Lights - A Fox Tale
Heya, it's your lucky day! Chrissy here for a review. Okay, that's enough of me being stupid. It'll be for you to decide it it's your lucky day. Well, one ...
Feb 13, 2015 -
Re: In which Emmaline first pretends
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, lets see what I can find... However, she was not always a princess. I didn't get that part. Is she a princess or ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! I'm going to do nitpicks first, like I usually do. Okay, here we go... It’s happening again. It always happens and there’s no way ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Preemie to Obesity
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, I'm going to start right off on nitpicking. Machines connected to me worked my body for me. You have two me's in this ...
Feb 8, 2015 -
Re: The Story of Not (revised)
Hey,Chrissy here for a review! Well, what can I say? Rather confusing beginning. Then again, I think it was meant to be like that. ;) I'm going to start with ...
Feb 7, 2015 -
Re: That Could Be A Book (Chapter 1-3)
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, I'm going to start with the nitpicks tearing it to shreds. Don't worry. ;) Just kidding. Okay, let's see what I can find. ...
Feb 5, 2015 -
Re: World Peace
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! :D Well, let's see what I can find... The world is great Need a comma there. Otherwise, there's nothing wrong with that bit! We ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Lessons Well-Learned
Heya, Chrissy here for a review. Um, wow. How is someone supposed to review something like that? Ah, well, guess I can try. In this young life, I would suggest ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: She flows one last time
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, first I want to say that I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but I'll do my best. Screaming, hospital sirens above her ...
Feb 1, 2015 -
Re: Learning Targets
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, let's see what I can find... because with out Learning Targets Without. Not with out. High school students are NOT as smart as ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: *No Name Yet* Prologue
Hey, Chrissy here for a review! Um, wow! I don't know what to say. This Hadrian is just the nicest guy ever. All heart. I mean, killing the queen. How ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: My Brother
Hey, Chrissy here for a review! Well, lets see what I can find... ;) "Be nice" my after said. Ahem, I think you might have meant Father. All he did ...
Jan 29, 2015