Percybeth

Hello ticktock123! This is such an interesting poem because you fill the reader with one feeling to begin with; being happiness, home, sanctuary. And right at the end you pull ...

Lumi, Before I even finished your poem, more specifically, once I read the end of your first stanza, I embellished your poem a star. You're vocabulary is amazing here. How ...

SparktoFlame, This is so cute, especially the ending, but I just have a knack for endings. When I read your first line, it reminded me of hanging ornaments on Christmas ...

Huda0509, So I did like this piece of poetry. I like the repetitiveness, I think you just have to add more emphasis in certain spots so it doesn't sound so ...

Mathimouse, So, if you didn't write what you did in your description, I wouldn't have known that this was about orphans. And I think that either way, if I knew ...

Collideascope, yES. i AM CRAZY IN LOVE WITH THIS. The endings to every one of your stanzas were beyond perfect. Ugh, and the last one *heart eyes* just completely fabulous! ...

Niteowl, This was sweet and short and cute. I liked the optimism, since many people like to write tragic poems, because it's easier. So I appalaud and thank you for ...

Musicandme, The title fits perfectly. I love it. Because the word 'crave' is generally associated when you convince yourself that you need something although it's bad, like love that was ...

Penprincess, Just like your description suggests, this poem is really cute! c: I've read it like three times over and it just makes me smile, awh. My only suggestion is ...

Hello rhiasofia! I really like the title of your poem, it totally stood out to me as I was scrolling through the Green Room. The imagery was great, you didn't ...

Hey Renard! So I really like the title of this piece. I didn't even think of it as sweat or blood or anything before I read the poem. :P So ...

So this poem surprised me, but I'm confused on the message. Here is my interpretation if you hopefully don't mind: First off, judging from the title, this is obviously a ...

Rhiasofia, I simply chose this poem because of its title. Definitely very intriguing and set up a beautiful doorway for its contents. Great job there. When I read the first ...

aboredguy, tHIS IS FABULOUS. I loved the ending! Death is a work of art. That is just my favourite line throughout this entire poem. My only nitpick was the punctuation. ...

SapphireEyes, First of all, I like your username xP Moving on, I liked the font you used for this, it seemed to fit. It's just to basic, but sort of ...