Paracosm

Hey there Persy! I'm a little intimidated reviewing one of your poems, but I'll give it a go. :P I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. I ...

Hey Starry! This poem is great. I must say I am impressed! You do an awesome job keeping rhythm, but there were a few lines that stood out to me. ...

Hey there Deaththekid! I'm going to give you a quick review. My review won't be too in depth, because I haven't read the first chapter of your story. I'll mainly ...

Hey Horribliss! I'm going to give you a quick review. This piece was very entertaining. Not much actually happened, but it was still an amusing piece of writing. I can ...

Hey Jal! This is a very interesting story idea. I'm going to give you a quick review. One thing you need to watch out for is word repetition. You had ...

First of all, Shino, as Karzkin pointed out, this is not a haiku. It does not meet the technical criteria. A haiku must be about nature, particularly a season. It ...

Hey demib! I'm going to give you a quick review. This poem is really quick and interesting. It is also pretty abstract. So anyway! On with the review! The first ...

Hey Gee! I'm gonna give you a quick line by line review. This poem is really awesome, so this review will probably be pretty short. The first line is good, ...

Hey Lycando! I'm going to try to give you a review that can match one of your's in caliber. I'm going to start with an overall critique, then I'll give ...

Hey there, Aouther! I'm going to give you a quick, stanza by stanza review. I'm a tad bit dreary, so I hope I can think coherently long enough for this ...

Hey there Fizz! I'm going to give you a quick review on your piece. The first paragraph is beautifully written. I really love how you describe the coming of fall. ...

Hey LTR! I'm going to go ahead and review this poem. I will do a stanza by stanza review, and then an overall review of the work. I hope my ...

Hey there Seastormy! I'm gonna give you a quick paragraph by paragraph review. The first paragraph is an interesting introduction, you do a good job hooking the reader in. It's ...

Hey Kriege! I'm going to give you a quick review. I've never read The Scarlet Ibis, but I'll do my best to review this work as clearly as possible. I ...

Hey Maddy! With 14 reviews in roughly three days on YWS, you're doing awesome. Keep up the good work. I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review of ...