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Re: Gangster's Girl
Wassup wassup wassup, My name is Ossum and this is your review. So, let me say one thing so I can get it off my chest, hehe. Nice guys. Read ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Miranda (Part II)
Wassup wassup wassup! My name is Ossum and this is your review! So, I will say that as far as technicalities go, I didn't see anything. The pace in which ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: A Moment of Silence
Wassup wassup wassup, my name is Ossum and this is your review! So, I both liked and admired your piece of poetry here. I will say that the bb codes ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: The Truth; Her Story
That was really a pleasure to read. ^-^ Wassup wassup wassup? My name is Ossum and this is your review! So as the guy below me said, some run on ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: .the backwards tale of a broken dreaM
Hi, so my name is Ossum and this is your review! So I liked the whole little bit of this piece. It was extremely well organized and it made me ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: Birthday For 99 Lonely Wasps
Whats up! My name is Ossum and this is your review. So I like how you have a reason behind your song. That is good, but I feel like you ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: Run
Hehe, well my name is Ossum and this is your review. So I dont know what to say. It seems like this piece is more of scene rather than a ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: Oh Night
So my name is Ossum and this is your review. So this piece is really something. It conveys not only a ton of imagery but it gives the term night ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: I Stand Before You
Wassup wassup wassup! My name is Ossum and this is your review! Now, I am a big believer that if you are going to use curses in a piece of ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: The Death Puppy
Wassup wassup wassup. My name is Ossum and this is your review! Now this kind of poetry is something I love reading because there are not tricks. There is no ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Cursed by Cupid
OK NO! NO NO NO NO! Why must she die T_T Oi...made me cry a bit.. Ok, my name is Ossum and this is your review. So, this is an ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: [removed]
So name is Ossum...and this is your review. So...reading this. I want to say that I am both happy and sad for you. Because this is a poem that has ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Broken
Ok, now I sit here, and read this. Then I look to my right and see this beautiful smiling girl looking at me and I think. Ok...what? But I digress. ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part IX
So its either gonna be one of three things. One: Ren and Aiden Two: Ren and Kallin Three: Ren lets the two fight over her. ... Four: none of the ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Guards
Wow. Ya know sometimes I wish I could write a litte like this. The immersion of the whole thing was awesome. I loved the whole thing and every bit of ...
Dec 3, 2013
