OreosAreLife

Keepwriting, this was amazing. The only thing I recommend is more detail. Otherwise your flow was nice and it kept me reading. I like how your took something like the ...

Hi Rascalover! This was a great poem. I like the flow of it, it kept me reading. It was wonderfully written! I love your time frames and the way you ...

Hey Jedideadpool!This poem was really sweet. I This was beautifully written and I think your flow from line to line was great, it kept me reading. I was touched by ...

Hi Phangirldivergent46! First off the only mistake I see is that you misspelled chocked in line 11. It should be choked. Other than that I can say that I have ...

Keepwriting, this was a beautiful poem. I like the visuals it gave me and the flow from line to line kept me reading. But one thing is that the question ...

Speakerskat, This was a great poem! The flow from line to line was great and kept the poem going! The way you described stuff throughout the poem was great and ...

Hi, speakerskat! This was a very beautiful poem. I love the visual it gave me and your flow from line to line was magnificent! Your choice of words made me ...

Ehtaniel, Good job on this chapter. I loved the battle between Emilie and Louise! The way you described it in detail made it easier to understand what was going on. ...

matt2358, This was a beautiful written poem. I see why you won third. It was very good and the way you described the pen made me visualize it in my ...

JediDeadpool, This was a good story! The ending was a little surprising, but in a good way. I love your title, it was what drew me in to read it. ...

Hi BaileyTheHoosier! That poem was beautifully written. I felt the heartbreak within the words as I read it. You did an amazing job with this. Your flow was nice and ...

Oh wow. This was a sad but beautiful poem. You did a marvelous job writing that. The visual it gives and the emotion is so real that I actually feel ...

MemoryHunter, This poem was so sad. I'm sorry you feel this way. It was a beautiful poem though. You have a knack for poetry. One thing I did notice though ...

MemoryHunter, I think that this poem is a little confusing as to what you are trying to say. Your thought jump around a lot. I think that is a drama ...

Aditchere, that was a really good poem. I think you hit all the mark of what today is suppose to mean. I though it was really inspirational and I took ...