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  • Poetry » General, General Re: kingdom of hate

    Hey gammagamerale, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off, great job writing this it was a great poem. And I really felt the the lines: No friends to ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Amazing life!

    Hey BookOholic22, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! I have to say that this was a very amazing and inspirational poem. I took the words to heart. You did ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Faded

    Hey phangirldivergent46, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First I like the title it really caught my eye and I wanted then to read what you wrote. While reading ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Most Beautiful Frown

    Hey, BaileyTheHooser, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off this was a sad yet beautiful poem! I loved the emotion from it and the love. I felt it ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Runners - Chapter 1

    Hey zsmith! It's AshleyDashley here for a quick review. First off: I loved this! It was amazing! And your title caught my attention so I'm glad. I thought this was ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Have Learned to Hate the Dark

    Hey RippleGylf, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off the title caught my eye and made me want to read it so good job on that! Second this poem ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Bay Beach Girls #1: The Rescue *Chp. 1*

    Hey Gymnast2801, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off, this chapter was great! I loved the characters and my favorite so far is Smudge. I love cats-----even if ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: My Own Sick Wonderland

    Hey JustOneMorePoem! It's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I love Alice in Wonderland. It was cool to go though it, but yet this had a different meaning. At ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ANNA

    Hey HazelShay, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off this poem was was amazing. And since it is your first way to go! I say no grammar errors ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words Matter!

    Hey Kaju, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off your tile was catchy. It caught my eye and made me want to read what you had to say. ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: time

    hey Gammagamerale, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off I like the theme of your poem and then the direction you took with it. However watch your punctuation ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Yet Again

    Hey PaperNessa it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First of magnificent job with your description throughout the poem! I could visualize what you were saying easily! Great job on ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Stand In Wonder

    Greendog74, This poem was great! I like the visual it gives off and I can clearly see it in my head. I also like your repetition of your poem I ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Apologies from a Broken Soul

    BaileyTheHoosier, This was a wonderful poem! I took this poem to heart because I can relate to it. I can feel the emotion this poem brings as I read it. ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Library.

    Hey bloodstring! It's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I LOVE your theme! A library is my home away from home and I can totally relate to this. It ...

    May 10, 2016


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