Amazing life!

Life it is your novel, it’s like a trip! Everything you must have, is smile, love, and the best memories! Don’t stop and everything will be fine)

Hi! prithamrittika is here for a short review.You described about life.The topic is nice and It's also inspirational.Your poem is simple. The starting of the poem is very good,

"Life is a roller coaster ride.
You shout and you get scared
still you enjoy it.
And you take the ride again."

I like the starting much.overall it is nice and simple but it should be more better..so keep writing more and more and read more poetry books..

A very good poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly, even though it was a little short.

Hi,

I am not sure what the purpose of your writing this poem is. You could just be writing for fun (which is perfectly fine), but, if you want to someday perfect your art of writing, you should know a few things. There is not much that can be said about the poem except that it lacks substance entirely. Your metaphors at the beginning of the stanzas are ridiculously plain and boring. While this is inspirational, as pure poetry it is simply shallow. I recommend you read books on poetry and read lots of other people's poems (but not from people on this site...) I recommend "A Poison Tree" by William Blake.

Lemons

Amazing thought! Simply loved it!

Hey BookOholic22, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review!

I have to say that this was a very amazing and inspirational poem. I took the words to heart. You did a magnificent job writing it. I like the lines:

Life is a book,

you write the chapters.

Chapters of memories and feelings,

and chapters of joys and sorrows.

Remember,

Be the author of your book.

Recreate some chapters,

add magic to some

and establish your own title.

Life is all about taking risks,

enjoying each moment no matter what.

Adventures to be taken

and failures' to be forgotten.

Life is a game of chess,

and we are pawns.

Make the right move, be the queen

and the game is yours.