OliviaWhoWrites

Let me start off by saying that I thought this was a very intriguing poem. I loved the subject matter and I thought it was well done. Now onto my ...

Wow this was a lovely, sexy piece if poetry! Lets do a line by line review, shall we? "At midnight I’m poultry As white as the sheets And the pillows ...

This poem was as beautiful as it was realistic. Never have I read something that so accurately describes the life of a daydreamer during a horrid class. This poem is ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I thought the story you were telling was very original. The cadence was nice and nothing seemed off about the grammar. Even though it ...

This was a lovely poem! I liked the use of boldface print to emphasize certain words. Was this intended to be read like a slam poem? Because that's how I ...

To start out I'd like to say that I really liked this piece. I feel like haikus are a very underrated form of poetry so I like that you made ...

This was a lovely piece! Was this intended to be a work of slam poetry? Because that's how I read it. I thought the subject matter was interesting and I ...

Wow this is a great poem! The word choice is excellent and it shows you have a very large vocabulary. I also have to commend you on the rhyming with ...

Lovely poem! Lets review this line by line, shall we? "I am your sophisticated machine. Every part- you keep pristine. I am your "Everything-You-Need," and for only you, I will ...

Let me start by saying I thought this was a beautiful piece. The language was very strong and the figurative language was beautiful. Some of my favorite lines were, "You ...

Hello Pickle! Let me start off my saying that I really enjoyed this poem. It did a great job of portraying love at first sight with great imagery and word ...

I really liked this poem. A poem about politics is a small rarity on this site! This piece reminded me a lot of Les Miserables, particularly the scene in which ...

Well this poem was delightfully refreshing. It's a great contrast from the flowery love poems and depressing melodramatic prose that is the majority of poetry. I could really feel the ...

Hello! Let me first say that I thought your poem was very interesting. I think it's a lovely concept that you're trying to portray. However, I did feel like this ...

Well this is lovely! Rain is one of my personal favorite topics to read poetry about so this short little tidbit was just delightful. I think the formatting and structure ...