Oakenshield

This was creepy the most poems that I read are going about the dead, but I like your poem, it was so deep and I love it cause it rhymes. ...

The last line was PERFECT, it gives me a feeling that I want to be there, now, but I can't go there and this is SO brilliant from your poem, ...

I love it so much, I think this poem goes about a mask that we are wearing and pretend to be someone else. I love the idea of the fox ...

Ooh wow really cool, this poem is so powerful and it gives me a happy feeling, I like also that you counting in your poem, my favorite line is ''Why ...

Okay I think this poem goes about that we can live on our own, we don't need help and we don't need other people... I understand your point but sometimes ...

Oh woow I love this one, especially the light in this that can take the darkness away. I have seen one type fault, maybe you have wrote to fast...amd provides ...

Oh woow this is a nice lyric, I love that piece where you write ''She makes wishes on passing cars because to her the stars are out of reach.'' That ...

This was a really cool poem, I can sometimes not sleep and what I do is listen to music or write poems to get in sleep. But sometimes I'm wide ...

This is really cool and I must think what I can say about this short poem, it is really beautiful, I like to write short poems too. With short poems ...

First of all, are this three seperate poems or is it one, that is confusing, but I like the details in your poem, it is filled with a lot of ...

Ineed! God is powerful and He can let us face the true, sometimes we need help and then we can ask Him for help. But the only rule is that ...

Haha this was so cool, I love it how you repeat that line with doctor in it.I think this poem goes about to make choices on our own, we don't ...

This is short but very powerful, I like it how you complimented the girl and how you put the image in your poem. I could see the girl right in ...

Oh wonderful, bravo, this was so cool, first of all this is my favorite that I have read, cause this one rhymes and it doesn't force, it has a nice ...