Writer writes and so do I. He imagines me writing and I write imagining him, writing about me.
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This is really cool and I must think what I can say about this short poem, it is really beautiful, I like to write short poems too. With short poems you can say a lot and short poems are sometimes more powerful.
But who is the writer, it is you or someone else? You can give the writer a name maybe? It is just an example, some advice, you didn't have to change it, it is perfect how you put this little poem in so much feelings.
But now I understand who the writer is, you say ''Writers writes and so do I'' so you mean ''we'', ''the others'' or ''the readers'' sorry this was a late answer from me, but I read your poem for the second time and now I understand who you mean with ''Writers''
Keep writing - Dazzle
I love this! Its so sweet, simple, and straight to the point. All the while being a pretzel in and of itself and making you pause re read and figure out all of the inner workings of your short poem. It is very creative and I applaud your confidence in yourself and your work. Not every writer, or poet, can accomplish what you have in five lines. Most poets tend to over analyze and exhaust their ideas, but your's kept it fresh and allowed further individual thought by the reader, and I like that! Nice job!
The deep longing I immediately got after reading this was extraordinary. At first, I assumed this would be such a plain and short poem. I quickly realized my error. It's almost as if this poem could apply to a multidude of situations. The man imagines the woman outside of her knowledge, possibly affectionately? And she writes for him. This unique kind of writing is actually realy refreshing. Great job.
I like it
This kinda confused me at first but then I re-read it a couple times and finally got the whole meaning. It was simply written yet had a more complex hidden message within it . You should definetly keep going with this kind if poem and writing. Good job. it kind of explains a different kind of writing or a different perspective of it
Timmy here for a review!
I am at a loss at to what to say, really. This is extremely short. Some might say it is too short, but after reading it, I can see that it is the perfect length. It leaves something to the imagination, as well.
I had to read it a few times before I fully grasped the meaning behind your words, but when I did, I went WOAH! This is such a neat and original idea! You express it simply, but also in a way which makes me think. The way I see it is this:
Lets put it in first person, so that it works better.
The writer writes about his creation, which is me. He imagines and writes about me writing and imagining him, so that is what happens. --Did I get it right there? xD
There is one teensy tiny thing that I would change, but it doesn't draw away from your poem, really.
That is all I have to say on this one! You definitely have a knack for this concise poetry, and definitely using your imagination. Keep writing and post more of this!
~Timmyjake
You got it exactly on the spot. thank you for your review!!
Wow this is really cool. It is short, which is good not wrong, and that is refreshing. You represented an interesting idea in 18 words. Your poem is kinda like an infinity, a writer writing about another writing about the first writer. Which is very interesting, and new. Your grammar was good, except you need a period or semi colon after the first "I". Otherwise awesome job, and keep writing.
Thank you!