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Hello, Skye! the silent movies... Having already heard it, I can say for sure it's a soulful song and MAY or MAY NOT break someone down to tears. The lyrics ...

Okay, let's review! You sit where you are: at the heart of the city, its mechanical throb   booming in your chest, or perhaps under the shade of acacia trees ...

First thing I want to say, is that this poem is really catchy. It sounds like a children's rhyme, really except for that last part. If you say it to ...

Hullo! Aqua here to review! The first thing I can say about this poem was that it was very contradictorial. And, the spacings were unnecessary: An evolution.  Visual and informational ...

Hullo! Aqua here to review! Like all of your poems, I can see that you're really into this, and this is a mirror of your own thoughts. I commend you ...

It's a good poem, let's out pent up feelings in a soft, undertoned poem. But, the spacings may be too far apart. It's also kind of unnecessary too. I think ...

First of all, this poem is really confusing, what all the who's and the what's and the why's. (Speaking from the heart,...seriously) Sure if you give it time to consider ...

Nice. This was ingenious, turning a conversation into a poem and however could you figure out how to rhyme like that? I liked it, a LOT and I hope you ...

Wonderful! Realistic and stark! I'd say you've gotten the hang of it! Great promise too! Now, let's review... There is no structure! A poetic piece must be separated into stanzas! ...

Your rhyming skills amaze me and scare me. I've read another one of your poems and I have to say, this is way better compared to that. Now, onto the ...

Hmm... First of all, this is a good piece. I like the use of imagery, the appealing to the reader's senses and so forth. It was was was was realistic... ...

Woah, woah, woah! Hold up! First let's talk about structure. Non-existent. I can see and obvious rhyme scheme but...it's going all over the place too... Here, let me fix up ...

Amazing! I loved the descriptions, the imagery, how you appealed to the readers five senses! The only thing that might be holding you down would be capitalization. It's not necessary ...

This is a really short prologue but let's see if we can make anything of it! " the day passes slowly, the sun already on it's track down to blanket the land ...

I really do love this story! And thank you for not having any cellphone calls in this one! Even though you have a lot of work to do in term ...