Noelle

Hi there! Noelle back again. Oh, I forgot to mention one thing in my last review. You did such a good job transitioning from the previous chapter into this one. ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. I'm almost to the last part you've posted! Uh oh, what am I going to do when I'm all finished?? Then I'll have to actually ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. I don't usually point out grammar or little mistakes unless I see them a lot, so I figured I'd point this one out. "They're hiding ...

Hi there! Noelle back again to do some reviewing! RP says popping up out of nowhere. Where exactly did he pop into? The room? Did he just stick his head ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I think it's cool that you've thrown Racen into this situation. Here she is, just going around with the other typos ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review. Your chapters transitions could use some work. I've noticed it since I started reading this, but I was waiting in case ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. "What about Wold," I ask with no small amount of concern. This makes it sound like Racen doesn't care about Wold. I think you meant ...

Hi there! Noelle back again to review. You know the drill ;) The more I read on, the more I notice that there's a big focus on time in this ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! The Author just might have said something to her. I decide to ask her about it during the meal. There is ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review. I hold on tightly to the rock imbedded in the ground as I slip down the hill. It's not really a ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I have permission to nitpick? Woo! xD Hopefully I can help you and not just repeat what everyone else has said. ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! First person, huh? Should be interesting. This'll definitely change some things, with your writing style and everything. This'll be fun! ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! "Alright I will tell you about it. There were trees stretching for miles beyond sight to the north and west, though ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Racen watched as the dwarf with his pickaxe and Wold, with her paws and claws dug down deep through the floor ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I have to say, this chapter is a lot better written than the last one. I think that's because this one ...