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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: love

    Hey, pineapple! It's been a while since I've reviewed anything, so I apologise in advance for how potentially ramble-ey this may turn out. The poem was short but managed to ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Health
    Re: The worst biriyani in history ....

    AAhh bad biriyani sounds bad. Especially because when you hear biriyani, you have like a certain level of expectation that you're gonna get a tasty lunch/dinner that day. And then ...

    Oct 2, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: The Letters I Never Wrote (Introduction/Prologue page)

    Hey Enemy! First of all, I have to say that this is an interesting and heart-touching concept. The title is enticing, and makes you want to read the chapter. One ...

    Jun 19, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Flowers

    Hey Victoria! Wow! This is a nice little poem. I like how it's simple and not too deep. It's light, and an easy read. It's got a pretty smooth rhyme ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Silhouette

    Hey Mingan! Wow! This is deeep! It's a really interesting idea. It's sort of like a "don't judge a book by it's cover; don't judge a person by their silhouette" ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Hey justateenagewriter! Wow! This is an interesting concept! I like how you're trying to make a more relatable human being out of the cliche rich girl trope. I like how ...

    Jun 14, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Broken pieces

    Hey I'dratherbedrawing! This is a really great poem, and I think you've expressed your feelings of brokenness in a beautiful manner. I like how you compare yourself to an unsolvable ...

    Jun 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Hey Andrew! First of all, let me just say, you've got an intriguing title. When I first read the title, I knew I had to read it. The theme is ...

    Jun 12, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: The Elfling - Prologue

    Hey eednamoj! Wow! This is a pretty griping has a lot of drama in very little text. It's really intriguing, and after reading this I really want to read the ...

    Jun 11, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Forever, And Ever

    Hey PixieStix! First of all, lemme just say that this is a beautiful poem! I love the feelings that you convey about how you love this person. I like how ...

    Jun 10, 2021

  • Hey Stringbean! I think you accurately explain the sentiments that you feel, about how we keep placing a lot of importance on meaningless degrees and academic awards, and struggle through ...

    Jun 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: An Ode to YWS but with Laundry Detergent

    Hey FireEyes! This is a really great poem! I love how you include a laundry detergent in every line! It's a really innovate idea, and you've implemented the concept really ...

    Jun 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Revenge

    Hey Phillauthet! First of all, I really liked the idea of the poem, and the whole "An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind." That's a really good ...

    Jun 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Falling

    Hey nightshadows! This was really good! The entire poem was really impactful and deep. I like how you repeat this stanza: One trip, One slip, One mistake, One shake. The ...

    Jun 5, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: Sauce-y

    AHH! The last line just took the entire poem to a next level of awesomeness! I love the intensity of the lines, how powerful they are. Like when you say, ...

    Jun 4, 2021

I’ll paraphrase Thoreau here... Rather than love, than money, than faith, than fame, than fairness, give me truth.
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