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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: love

    Hey, pineapple! It's been a while since I've reviewed anything, so I apologise in advance for how potentially ramble-ey this may turn out. The poem was short but managed to ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Health
    Re: The worst biriyani in history ....

    AAhh bad biriyani sounds bad. Especially because when you hear biriyani, you have like a certain level of expectation that you're gonna get a tasty lunch/dinner that day. And then ...

    Oct 2, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: The Letters I Never Wrote (Introduction/Prologue page)

    Hey Enemy! First of all, I have to say that this is an interesting and heart-touching concept. The title is enticing, and makes you want to read the chapter. One ...

    Jun 19, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Flowers

    Hey Victoria! Wow! This is a nice little poem. I like how it's simple and not too deep. It's light, and an easy read. It's got a pretty smooth rhyme ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Silhouette

    Hey Mingan! Wow! This is deeep! It's a really interesting idea. It's sort of like a "don't judge a book by it's cover; don't judge a person by their silhouette" ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Hey justateenagewriter! Wow! This is an interesting concept! I like how you're trying to make a more relatable human being out of the cliche rich girl trope. I like how ...

    Jun 14, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Broken pieces

    Hey I'dratherbedrawing! This is a really great poem, and I think you've expressed your feelings of brokenness in a beautiful manner. I like how you compare yourself to an unsolvable ...

    Jun 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Hey Andrew! First of all, let me just say, you've got an intriguing title. When I first read the title, I knew I had to read it. The theme is ...

    Jun 12, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: The Elfling - Prologue

    Hey eednamoj! Wow! This is a pretty griping has a lot of drama in very little text. It's really intriguing, and after reading this I really want to read the ...

    Jun 11, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Forever, And Ever

    Hey PixieStix! First of all, lemme just say that this is a beautiful poem! I love the feelings that you convey about how you love this person. I like how ...

    Jun 10, 2021

  • Hey Stringbean! I think you accurately explain the sentiments that you feel, about how we keep placing a lot of importance on meaningless degrees and academic awards, and struggle through ...

    Jun 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: An Ode to YWS but with Laundry Detergent

    Hey FireEyes! This is a really great poem! I love how you include a laundry detergent in every line! It's a really innovate idea, and you've implemented the concept really ...

    Jun 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Revenge

    Hey Phillauthet! First of all, I really liked the idea of the poem, and the whole "An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind." That's a really good ...

    Jun 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Falling

    Hey nightshadows! This was really good! The entire poem was really impactful and deep. I like how you repeat this stanza: One trip, One slip, One mistake, One shake. The ...

    Jun 5, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: Sauce-y

    AHH! The last line just took the entire poem to a next level of awesomeness! I love the intensity of the lines, how powerful they are. Like when you say, ...

    Jun 4, 2021

Now I realize that there is no righteous path, it’s just people trying to do their best in a world where it is far too easy to do your worst.
— Castiel