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Re: for the want of learning how to accept & become
I won't pretend, I'm sure there's a ton of emotion and meassages I missed in this one, but I still enjoyed it a lot. I guess talking about death is ...
Jul 18, 2021 -
Re: Midnight ponderings
This was an amazing poem. I have never seen anyone describe the feeling of dreams better, maybe in inception haha. You used so many phrases that with so little words ...
Jul 18, 2021 -
Re: In My Head
I liked this one, you have shown very well how it feels to overthink. That is the great power of this poem, how relatable it is. I especially liked the ...
Jul 18, 2021 -
Re: Stand By Me
Much shorter than I expected, but it's not really a bad thing. Of course, if you made it a bit longer and let us expierience more of your feelings it ...
Jul 18, 2021 -
Re: The River
This one gave me a lot to think about. At first glance you give us a very positive lesson. That even after we are long gone, like that river, there ...
Jul 13, 2021 -
Re: Tiny bits of you
The poem is simple but takes on the most complicated subject there is, love. I really admire that about it. In such a simple way you describe how it feels ...
Jul 13, 2021 -
Re: A So-called Friend
Wow, the title got me hooked and I am glad it did. I heard somewhere that each of us should know our worth. Sometimes we give everything to relationships that ...
Jul 11, 2021 -
Re: One Day
Reading this poem I felt regret. It shows very well how we delude ourselves that one day we will be big enough to face our troubles, that one day we ...
Jul 11, 2021 -
Re: Not The Best
Here's a poem that deals with the "issue" of uniqueness, although is it really an issue? Is the one black rose truly a defect among all these red ones? I ...
Jul 11, 2021 -
Re: Rhapsody of the Late Monsoon
There's a lot to say about this one. I admire how you took simple things, things every reader has seen and expierienced and describe them in a way never done ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: Fools Gold
Wow that was something. I do not have much to say, but what I do have are compliments. The word choice and style of this thing, terrific. The emotional weight ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: The night
There is something about dreams and healing, or at least trying to deal with pain. I think this is a poem that leaves a lot of free space for interpretation, ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: Blueberry Bush
Learn to take pride in your work, you're no Cohen or Hemingway but what you write is yours and deserves to be loved. This was a good poem. What got ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: An Ode to A Sunflower
Prepare to be disarmed by wholesomeness, at least I was. This poem has so much joy in it, inspired by something so simple and overlooked as a flower. It suprised ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you
This one is interesting. You gave us a lot of raw feelings. The thought you wanted to portray is great, we get a glimpse of who you were and why ...
Apr 22, 2021
