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NightsInWhiteSatin

NightsInWhiteSatin

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: for the want of learning how to accept & become

    I won't pretend, I'm sure there's a ton of emotion and meassages I missed in this one, but I still enjoyed it a lot. I guess talking about death is ...

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Midnight ponderings

    This was an amazing poem. I have never seen anyone describe the feeling of dreams better, maybe in inception haha. You used so many phrases that with so little words ...

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In My Head

    I liked this one, you have shown very well how it feels to overthink. That is the great power of this poem, how relatable it is. I especially liked the ...

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stand By Me

    Much shorter than I expected, but it's not really a bad thing. Of course, if you made it a bit longer and let us expierience more of your feelings it ...

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The River

    This one gave me a lot to think about. At first glance you give us a very positive lesson. That even after we are long gone, like that river, there ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tiny bits of you

    The poem is simple but takes on the most complicated subject there is, love. I really admire that about it. In such a simple way you describe how it feels ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A So-called Friend

    Wow, the title got me hooked and I am glad it did. I heard somewhere that each of us should know our worth. Sometimes we give everything to relationships that ...

    Jul 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: One Day

    Reading this poem I felt regret. It shows very well how we delude ourselves that one day we will be big enough to face our troubles, that one day we ...

    Jul 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Not The Best

    Here's a poem that deals with the "issue" of uniqueness, although is it really an issue? Is the one black rose truly a defect among all these red ones? I ...

    Jul 11, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rhapsody of the Late Monsoon

    There's a lot to say about this one. I admire how you took simple things, things every reader has seen and expierienced and describe them in a way never done ...

    May 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Fools Gold

    Wow that was something. I do not have much to say, but what I do have are compliments. The word choice and style of this thing, terrific. The emotional weight ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The night

    There is something about dreams and healing, or at least trying to deal with pain. I think this is a poem that leaves a lot of free space for interpretation, ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Blueberry Bush

    Learn to take pride in your work, you're no Cohen or Hemingway but what you write is yours and deserves to be loved. This was a good poem. What got ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: An Ode to A Sunflower

    Prepare to be disarmed by wholesomeness, at least I was. This poem has so much joy in it, inspired by something so simple and overlooked as a flower. It suprised ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you

    This one is interesting. You gave us a lot of raw feelings. The thought you wanted to portray is great, we get a glimpse of who you were and why ...

    Apr 22, 2021


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind