Mysticalxx

You're welcome!

Nice work! Thanks for this piece of encouragement. It's always nice to receive heartfelt motivation from people.

Wow, wow! Such emotion! :) Congratulations on this poem! It expresses your spirit, your dedication and your love for your people so clearly! :) I liked it very much. I ...

Nice haiku! When I first read the second line, I thought you were referring to the spring SEASON, but then I got it! :D So, you've made good usage of ...

You're welcome. :D

Really good poem! I guess it portrays the things we all want, but sadly cannot ever achieve due to the world we're living in! Nice job on this!. My favourite ...

This one was easy! I was thinking "lion" when I read the title, but you wrote "striped coat" in the poem, so it has to be either a tiger or ...

Good one!

Okay, thanks for constructive criticism! Like I said, I just like these unedited versions even though they have many flaws. :) By the way, I was in sixth grade when ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks!

Don't be disheartened; I'm sure this play will turn out great! Keep it up. :)

Yes, that's true. Anyways, thanks for the tips, and I know this articls has many weaknesses-it's my first one, after all-but you get the message, right? :)

AWESOME POEM. It is so beautiflul. I couldn't help marvelling as I read it. It is so..........raw beauty and description. There might be a few grammatical errors, but I'll ignore ...

No, it doesn't butcher the poem, I never said that. Look, I didn't mean any offence. I was trying to be helpful. It's your poem, do whatever you want with ...