Young Writers Society

Nice haiku! When I first read the second line, I thought you were referring to the spring SEASON, but then I got it! So, you've made good usage of vocabulary, and the syllable count is right! Insanity does reign.

Keep it up! Write more haiku! Fun fact: The plural of haiku IS haiku.

Mysticalxx

Hello, Skye!

Wow, this is the first haiku I've seen today that is an actual, proper haiku. Congratulations, dear. What I love about this is the message that it's sending across. Insanity isn't always as chaotic as people sometimes like to assume. Sometimes, insanity is calm and more of a slow and sweet coercion than a violent, chaotic possession.

Insanity reigns.

I have just started reading Haikus and have noticed that they seem very hard to pull off. I must say you are managed to do so.

Cool and refreshing
As a smooth, cold spring in June,
Insanity reigns.

Yay! I'm a huge fan of haikus, as they are difficult to pull off well. Plus, they're so much fun to write!

Anyway, I just have one TINY suggestion. Maybe instead of the comma at the end of the second line, you could put a dash, since the last line seems like more of the complete thought instead of a continuation of the previous lines.

Overall, lovely picture! Well done. And you managed to fit the traditional usage of nature into it, along with a not-so-traditional observation. I like it a lot.

Well done!

Nice work - haiku's have limitations and you did your best considering the Haiku limits.

Loved it. End.

x frm lucy

this poem was short, quick, easy-going and i liked it...the words flew together well and the shortness of it was excellent considering that you explained all that was necessary to be explained/conveyed in just those three lines. but hey, sometimes that's all you need is that three lines.
anyway, good job...short poems rule.