MissRockers

hahaha. you know what? I started smiling at the very first two lines! :) Probably because I don't say torso very much. I really don't have any MAJOR issues with ...

Good job capturing the complete dark side of friendship. It's not just fine and dandy all the time, it hurts a lot too. But, we just push on with our ...

Wow. This was deeeeeeep. Such good vocabulary is embedded in this also,in every line. I'd rather run from my thoughts more often than not, than be antagonized by the agonizing ...

I liked reading this poem, but I agree with some of the comments above mine. I think it REALLY needs more explanation, and describing WHY you are happy, why we ...

For some reason, I kept thinking that this poem could very easily become a song!! Have you thought about that?? I think it would be great. But, as far as ...

This is about God right?? I'm just wondering! Never did you mention it, but, that's my assumption.I might be wrong though. lol. K, time for nitpicks: I am caught in ...

This is such a sweet poem. I'm glad you feel this way. I wish everyone would. Life would be so much easier. But, of course, life's not fair, and it's ...

Oh, this is such a great poem. I share SO much empathy with you. We are in the same shoes my friend. Now the nitpicks: After I read this poem, ...

Oh wow, wonderful. I really liked this. Isn't it terribly sad how some of us put so much into relationships, and we fight so hard, but, in the end, we ...

Yay! Now I can say the same thing about your poem. It rhymes!!!! haha, don't you feel a sense of accomplishment after you get done with a poem or story? ...

I pretty much liked it, but it was very short. Too short actually. I wanted to hear more about your childhood with this friend, and what happened as you grew ...

This poem really captures the MEANING behind "why do people write?" It's because they need and want people to hear what they have to say. Excellent job portraying this. Until ...

Yes! Amen. This reminds me SO much of my poem. Seriously. It really does. It's talking about a mask that you both put on. Although your mask stays the same ...

First of all, this poem is great. My heart just split open for you! I just wanted to give you a hug, or SOMETHING! And, before I get into the ...

I could sense the yearning for love, even though it might be considered sacrilege by others. Also, I could sense, you were yearning for One who would accept you no ...