MissGangamash

First thing I thought when reading this was, 'Loki, is that you?' XD The first half sounds exactly like something he would say to us mere mortals, and the second ...

"he found himself looked in to the upside down faces" - He found himself looking up at upside-down faces? Again with the lack of world building, I know there wasn't ...

This is a great start to a very chilling story. When I figured out that Amy was blind, I was hooked. I've never read anything about a blind person before ...

Another great chapter! Because it's so short I don't really have much to point out. Someone else has taken care of the mistakes so I won't go through them again. ...

I like where this is going and am wondering how this all fits in with what happened in the prologue because these are a set of whole new characters. I ...

This is a good start to a very promising novel. I'm guessing you are going to go into more detail about the disease later on but I think a little ...

'flakes of dandruff settling like snow on his shoulders.' - 'settling' should be 'settled.' 'he took the ID card and swipped it through the scanner' - 'swipped' should be 'swiped' ...

I dunno if anyone else has picked up on the mistakes that I have but I'll just point them out anyway as I read and give you my thoughts at ...

Really liked this! It was super dark and disturbing which I totally love XD I had a feeling that the red paint was blood but still, the ending was very ...

This is simple and sweet and totally relatable. I am right in the same position, I've come to just accept that it's not my time yet. Not going to lie, ...

I loved the cliff-hanger at the end! It has me thinking, is the voice in his head? Is there actually a ghost there? What I think would have added the ...

Omg, you have basically written my life XD This is amazing and no joke, I've written a short story about my high school/college experience that so similar to this it's ...

I really enjoyed this read. I could totally feel the emotion in it. The comparison to the Tsunami was excellent and described what had happened to this person who she ...

I get what you mean but...the 'We shouldn’t writhe in pain mentally because everyone is dying, there’s always a bright side' is a bit silly. Some people have mental conditions ...

I really enjoyed this. It was short but enticing and I would love to read more. The procedure the main character is going through sounds very obscure but seems the ...