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Re: Eden
Hello there! This poem is short, simple, and utterly beautiful. I loved reading this, and almost picturing the person saying these things. The lines in this poem are short, yet ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Evil Pimple
Wow, I was a bit surprised to read this, honestly. The name made me click it, because I was curious what you might do with a title like that, and ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Beauty and me
Hello there! Okay, so I was a bit surprised by the actual poem when I first clicked on it, like some of the others it seems haha. I found this ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: FAREWELL, HELLO
Hello there! This poem I found to be slightly confusing when I first read it (might not be your fault, since it is a bit late here right now), but ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: point of light
Wow! This poem was short and simple, which I liked. It seemed to me that I could relate to it a lot, which is wonderful. There really isn't many flaws ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Quiet to Explosive
Hey, here for a review! :) I really enjoyed this poem. It was very visual for me, which I love to see in poetry. It was beautiful, and the word ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: I think you forgot..
Hey, here to do a review! :) Okay, I really enjoyed the ideas and themes of this poem, but I think the long parts in the beginning could be shortened ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Birds of a Feather
Hey, here to do a review! I'm not one for happy, lovey poems (That's what it seemed to be to me), but I really enjoyed this. The rhyme really made ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: One Twin
Hey, here to review! :) Okay so I only noticed one spelling mistake here; "were always together," 'were' should be 'we're' as in we are. I think the idea here ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Trapped Inside
Hey dear, here to do a review :). Okay, so I really enjoyed the idea here. Very relate able because everyone can take it in their own way and apply ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Love is War
Hey, here for a review! Okay, this poem is really good, and I really enjoy the idea you brought up here, but in my opinion it leaves the reader guessing, ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Coin
Hey, here to review! This really speaks to me, in the since of working for academic achievement. This was beautifully written, and I found no spelling mistakes (there may be ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Hello, I loved this poem, because I could see what was happening, and I love seeing into a persons (Character or real life) head. This really captured me from the ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: I wasnt ready...
Hello, I enjoy this poem a lot, the title is what caught my eye. I was interested to see where you would go with a title like that. Though, I ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: The Flip Side
Hello, I enjoyed this, though I do think there could have been a little more to it in my opinion. I did enjoy this a lot though, it really got ...
May 12, 2014
