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  • Short Story » General, General Re: summer days

    Hey Jas! Your stalker is back. xD! I found this piece of yours and couldn't push away the temptation of reading and reviewing it. my aunt, the broker, isn't actually ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Bitter Sweet

    Hey Lily! :3 Hope brought people up, and then shattered them. Nice line! Even if it might create disappointment, hope also helped people through trying times. How 'bout 'hard' times? ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Untitled? (Chapter 1)

    Hey Wonder! Mia here to review you. I hope I can help you with this chapter of yours. ^_^ I got more excited for a new John Green vlog and ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, Fantasy Re: How Clove Met Kay

    Hey, reason! I promised you I'd review so here I am. I hope my review would help you out. Well, well, how do I start? xD! I always face this ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Same thing

    Hey Lamster! *hugs* I'm so glad for reading something by you, even if it's a short piece of prose. To be honest, I'm not sure how I should begin because ...

    Jun 23, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: woman

    Hey Jas! I'm just stopping by to comment but let me tell you beforehand that I don't have anything constructive to say. Simply because I am horrible at poetry. xD! ...

    Jun 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: The Call of Nature

    Hey Ky! I never review poetry, and I don't see why I'd have to change now. But I couldn't contain myself from commenting on this one. If people think that ...

    Jun 22, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: suffering

    Hey Auro! Welcome to YWS, first of all. How's the site been treating you so far? If you've got anything you'd like to ask, just drop me a PM. Just ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: My World- Prologue

    Hey Mons! :3 I'm here to review you today and I hope I can help you out. Since this was short, my review will be short, too. Prologues are meant ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Jealousy

    Hey, Nike! I've seen your works around before but I haven't really gotten a chance to read and review. I'm so glad I can do this now. I'd really love ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Kidnapped

    Hey, BabyM! James who was older than me by a year with dark eyes and blong hair slammed his elbow against the side. You could even write like this-"James, who ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Unbroken, Chapter Four, Part One.

    Hey, Anna! :wink: Aww, I just noticed that there's no review before mine and had I known this before I'd have come before. First of all, I'm so thrilled to ...

    Jun 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Momma's Crayons

    Hey, LIly! :3 I am not much of a poetry person but I found this concept interesting so couldn't stop myself from commenting. And if you find any non sensical ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Other » Review, Realistic Re: Detailed Character Template

    Hey Enigma! Thanks for posting the request. This is an usual kind of a thing I've got to review so this should be fun. I just hope I'm of some ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Unbroken, Chapter Three, Part Two

    Anna! I'm here once again, as promised! :wink: I don’t need two mum’s. Alright, so when you say mum's it means something belonging to her. But when you say mums ...

    Jun 8, 2012


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