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The poem is actually good. I enjoy reading it but there is something wrong in the last line. Probably other than: "I could watch instead" Its suppose to be: "I ...

Wow! I enjoy reading this poem. Its very unique and I can't actually really relate to this poem. A friend of mine, back in our elementary graduation, I couldn't say ...

Hello! I like reading this poem. It has a good vibe to it. But there are some lines that I don't really get like : "A powerful movement of life ...

I find this poem sweet and romantic but there were some lines that made me confuse like: "A thought about you makes my day Makes me thank God in this ...

Hello! :) I have a question, did you make the spelling of your title wrong in purpose? Or wrong type? Or probably you want to be creative? Because there are ...

Oh wow, I really love this poem. I haven't read the book but I watched the movie and I was interested in watching it because its connected to the Lord ...

I can see the magic in you haha! I find the poem very funny and interesting. It makes the readers enlighten their mood, or something like that. Because it work ...

Wow! This poem is so sad! Like I feel the sadness within me. The poem is really good. I enjoy reading it so much. I like the first three lines ...

Oh lol i just recently reviewed your poem called Fear. Its like you're into writing dark poems, right? :) okay, here is my review. Actually I really love this poem. ...

Hello! This is my review! I like how to construct your poem. The creativity is there. And I like how it sounded. But I have a suggestion, on the third ...

The poem is actually good but I don't think it's the right way, for me only :) Because the way you constructed it, its not the poetry way. Or probably ...

I like the poem. But I have suggestions, in the second line, other than "bye" why not say "goodbye" cause its more proper and it has a good manner to ...

Hello, the poem is actually good, but there is an error to to it. First, is the "salty, cool, sweet"...you have the two types of taste which are "salty" and ...

Wow! This poem is so sweet! I love i! :) My favorite part: "I know that I say that I don't want children now, And I don't think you do ...

Somehow this poem is dark. If this poem is about you, in my honest answer I can really relate to this poem. I can actually feel it, but its like ...