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Re: The Flight of the Silverbird
I love this poem so much. I like how it started to the end. Also, the style of your poem. When I read the poem, I can just imagine the ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to These Years
The poem is so calm and so smooth. I really like it! :D I like the last stanza: [quote*]The sky of these years has helped us to grow. Life has ...
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: An Unusually Sunny Face
Omg I know this poetry form but I forgot the name! :D It was very interesting to write a poetic form like this. Had it in my poetry class. I ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: The Dark Side
If this was a personal poem, like it connects to you, I would help you to solve your problem. I felt there is sadness in this poem. Like you are ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: Tears of Rainbows
Hello! :) Here is my review! I actually like the poem but the tone is off balance for me. In the poem, you can erase the word "maybe" because for ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: bathing suit
Hello! This is a good poem but you have to capitalize all the first letter of the first word in the poem. Because that's what poem should be like. Also ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: Ink to Paper
The poem is really good! I like the tone! Its very well balance! But I wonder on this the first line: "Like sunlight burning at midnight" I'm confuse of what ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: The morning mist
The poem is good but not in poetry form. I'm amazed that you made this poem while you were walking but be careful cause if you did this while crossing ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Our Death makes us different
I can feel the chills in this poem! Hahaha! :D The poem is really really really good! I can feel the dark aura on this poem! And its really sad! ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Visions
Your Poem is very interesting. Its very dark and power. Like a girl power is going to defeat the demons :D But there are few mistakes here in the poem. ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Hope In The Dark
I love the concept of this poem. Its very well written and I like how it actually sounds :) I'm a Christian and I always believe that God help us. ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
This is a good simple but I find it short like you directly went straight down to the end. I wanted to know how this is all started like where ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: I'll Teach My Daughter To Love Herself
I got teary :'( its so sweet...I love the poem so much. Soon, I know you will be a great mother :D this poem is like, "I want to read ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Future Possibilities
This is a short poem! I love the concept of this poem. I can actually understand this poem because I can relate to it. Sometimes, its not hard to forward ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Silence
This is one scary poem I have ever read. This poem is good and its psychological. My favorite part: "The cold strips you bare, Making you shiver. It freezes your ...
Mar 30, 2015
