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Re: I wish he knew/I wish she knew
All right, I'm here to review for the Big Review. I know this is really old, but I couldn't find anything new of yours, and this caught my eye! This ...
Wed Jul 08, 2015 11:49 pm -
Re: pyrotechnique
Hello! I'm here to review for The Big Review. To be honest, the first time I read this poem, I didn't understand it. But then I went back and read ...
Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:17 am -
Re: The Stolen Bride | Unedited
Here for the review you requested! You asked me to talk about dialogue, characters, and descriptions. Well, here goes. Characters and Dialogue - These go together so I'm putting them ...
Thu Jun 04, 2015 7:14 pm -
Re: The Post-perpetual world - Chance meeting
Hello! Glad to see another chapter up. Overall, I think the third person worked pretty well. Of course, it would be better to stick to one or the other, especially ...
Thu Jun 04, 2015 3:19 pm -
Re: C'est la vie
Hey there! This is really sweet, though I admit to needing Google Translate to figure out the title. Once I did that, everything made sense, and I commend you on ...
Sun May 31, 2015 11:07 pm -
Re: The Outside
Hey there! Here to drop a review on this lovely piece. Overall, I very much liked it. The flow was pretty good, as well as the structure and content. I ...
Sun May 31, 2015 10:50 pm -
Re: A night of thought for the Joker
This is pretty interesting. Though I have never really gotten into superhero stuff, I get a good idea of what the Joker is like here (and boy is he creepy). ...
Sun May 31, 2015 9:46 pm -
Re: Dappled I: Flame and Glow
Wow, this is pretty. I'd love to hear this read out loud. Like first-flight birds, the days together flow. Breathing deeply, I know where I have been. Life dapples the ...
Sun May 31, 2015 6:33 pm -
Re: Adam's apple
Hey there! Here's my attempt to review this short and delightful piece. I love your balance of humor in this. It's really funny without being uncomfortably irreverent to Christians (or ...
Sun May 31, 2015 6:10 pm -
Re: The Fair Elf Princess
Hey there! I commend you for writing this start - you've already gotten quite far into it. Good luck with continuing it! On to the review. It's got potential, but ...
Sun May 31, 2015 1:22 pm -
Re: Have you ever?
Hey there! I think I'm going to talk about two things in this review. The first is your style, and the second is the content/imagery/themes. Style Putting it delicately, this ...
Sun May 31, 2015 12:33 am -
Re: Being a Writer
Here for the promised review! So, as I've said before, your vocabulary and flow are amazing. I especially love all the little rhymes in there. Usually when poets rhyme without ...
Mon May 25, 2015 4:58 pm -
Re: Suhaag Raat
Thanks for requesting a review! Now let's get down to business. This is an interesting start. I enjoy reading about other cultures (I'm American) so this is interesting for me. ...
Sat May 23, 2015 10:04 pm -
Re: Accounts of Her Name are Lost in The Basement
Hey there! I like this poem. Although to some it can seem like blaming the victim, I know personally how easy it is to get "addicted" to those negative thoughts, ...
Sun Apr 26, 2015 11:50 pm -
Re: For life or for death
Ooh, this is really pretty. I love, love this. I could go on about your imagery for days. I love poems that play with color. Probably the coolest thing about ...
Sun Apr 26, 2015 11:39 pm
