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  • Poetry » General, General Re: pyrotechnique

    Hello! I'm here to review for The Big Review. To be honest, the first time I read this poem, I didn't understand it. But then I went back and read ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Stolen Bride | Unedited

    Here for the review you requested! You asked me to talk about dialogue, characters, and descriptions. Well, here goes. Characters and Dialogue - These go together so I'm putting them ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Post-perpetual world - Chance meeting

    Hello! Glad to see another chapter up. Overall, I think the third person worked pretty well. Of course, it would be better to stick to one or the other, especially ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: C'est la vie

    Hey there! This is really sweet, though I admit to needing Google Translate to figure out the title. Once I did that, everything made sense, and I commend you on ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Outside

    Hey there! Here to drop a review on this lovely piece. Overall, I very much liked it. The flow was pretty good, as well as the structure and content. I ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A night of thought for the Joker

    This is pretty interesting. Though I have never really gotten into superhero stuff, I get a good idea of what the Joker is like here (and boy is he creepy). ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Dappled I: Flame and Glow

    Wow, this is pretty. I'd love to hear this read out loud. Like first-flight birds, the days together flow. Breathing deeply, I know where I have been. Life dapples the ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: Adam's apple

    Hey there! Here's my attempt to review this short and delightful piece. I love your balance of humor in this. It's really funny without being uncomfortably irreverent to Christians (or ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fair Elf Princess

    Hey there! I commend you for writing this start - you've already gotten quite far into it. Good luck with continuing it! On to the review. It's got potential, but ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Have you ever?

    Hey there! I think I'm going to talk about two things in this review. The first is your style, and the second is the content/imagery/themes. Style Putting it delicately, this ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Being a Writer

    Here for the promised review! So, as I've said before, your vocabulary and flow are amazing. I especially love all the little rhymes in there. Usually when poets rhyme without ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Suhaag Raat

    Thanks for requesting a review! Now let's get down to business. This is an interesting start. I enjoy reading about other cultures (I'm American) so this is interesting for me. ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Accounts of Her Name are Lost in The Basement

    Hey there! I like this poem. Although to some it can seem like blaming the victim, I know personally how easy it is to get "addicted" to those negative thoughts, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For life or for death

    Ooh, this is really pretty. I love, love this. I could go on about your imagery for days. I love poems that play with color. Probably the coolest thing about ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Rain

    Hey there. I'm here to review this lovely piece. First off, a quick overall thing. In Stanza IV, the person the narrator is talking to leaves them for some reason, ...

    Apr 26, 2015


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