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Re: A Light for Tomorrow - Chapter 1.1
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. I'm sorry it took me a while to get around to it - I've been rather sick over the last couple ...
Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:23 am -
Re: Thoughts
Hey there! I'm here for a fairly quick review. So, I started out feeling fairly lukewarm about this poem, but as I read on it grew on me. I really ...
Sun Oct 25, 2015 12:10 pm -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy
Okay, this is really good. One of the strongest starts I've seen on here in a while. There are a few quirks that could use clearing up, though. 1. The ...
Sun Oct 25, 2015 8:12 am -
Re: Rooted
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, overall you have some interesting ideas about trees. I like your method of using the different words for trees in the ...
Wed Sep 30, 2015 11:53 am -
Re: snowflakes
Hey there! I'm here for quite a quick review. This is really very nice - I like the imagery and such. And it's cool that you wrote this for NaPo ...
Wed Sep 30, 2015 11:27 am -
Re: The Quarter-Mile to the Bus Stop
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely poem. So, first off, I love the metaphor and imagery you've got going here. You're taking a common, everyday ...
Wed Sep 30, 2015 9:59 am -
Re: Time,time
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. Overall, I like the idea you have. There are just a few issues that, when fixed, could make these lyrics great. Formatting ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 10:39 pm -
Re: The Withered Sky- Prologue.
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I love seeing people start new novels. They're such a huge project, but once you finish one, it's such a huge achievement, ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 9:55 pm -
Re: Chasing the Wind
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this really quite nice poem. I quite like the imagers you have in here. You keep the same pattern of images ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 12:34 pm -
Re: Octolunar Inventor
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, I quite like this. Your idea for the format is interesting, and I like that your rhyming works pretty well. It ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 12:21 pm -
Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this interesting piece. So, I call this piece interesting, because I can see you've got the makings of a great poem ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:40 am -
Re: Insane Love
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and thought "ooh, that's got to be good." And I wasn't disappointed! I really enjoyed this. I can really hear the ...
Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:23 am -
Re: Foolish
Hello there, and may I say, congrats on working up the nerve to publish a poem! I totally understand why you might want your work to be kept private. If ...
Mon Sep 28, 2015 11:45 am -
Re: Deleted.
Hey there! I'm here for a somewhat shorter review. So this is quite nice and simple, which is a bit refreshing. I like your last stanza - sometimes that really ...
Mon Sep 28, 2015 10:35 am -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 4
Hey there! I'm here for another review. And ooh SHE REMEMBERS AMY! That makes me happy. :D So, I feel like this part was a little bit shakier than some ...
Mon Sep 28, 2015 10:06 am
