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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Bully

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The poem raises a concern which is not usually raised in poems. Even though it's a personal experience, it can be ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If I had called the leaders to accountability.

    Hello there. Sorry, I didn't see this poem before. But now I am here to review. And I hope to give a fair one. First of all, I want to ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: in your absence

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. And hope that it is helpful. First of all I would say that I haven't reviewed anything like this yet, so ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mermaid

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. But before that I am confused that why aren't others reviewing or commenting. Are they saving this masterpiece for tomorrow? Well ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: What Would You Do?

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. And hope that I can be of help. What I liked— I haven't done a review on such a poem yet. ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    Hello there. I will try to give a fair review. The first line is simple but effective. It makes so much sense and it somewhat forces the reader to imagine ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Literature Re: Earth's Child- Chapter 1

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. What I liked— First of all the lines — 'The ability that everyone wanted to have, just wishing it would be ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Tendrils of Angst

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The poem is short, not that it is any problem, but that means my review is gonna be short too. I ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: To you, From me.

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. YWS review sandwich style. What I liked— I really liked the third stanza. Doing italic 'your' word was good work. I ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: new glasses

    Hello there. Just gonna give a review. It's personal thing for you, so I am not gonna say anything much. Also, you have cleared what was unclear through your reply ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blissful Abyss

    Hello there. I hope to give you a fair review. YWS review sandwich style!!!! What I liked— I personally like rhyming poems, and this one was that. The poem is ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: the day i spoke my mind

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. Trying to do the YWS review sandwich for the first time. What I liked— I really liked that the poem is ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: City That Dreams

    Hello there. I believe I can do a better review (even though I don't live in Mumbai, but hey, I live in Delhi!) I agree to the person who said ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: fierce and proud

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. I don't know much about fantasy poems. So it is just a short review. The last line of first stanza seems ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: You are your hope

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The concept is good, even if common. But some words were not clear, like 'darkness chambers'. Did you mean dark chambers ...

    Jan 26, 2017


The function of education is to teach one to think intensively and to think critically. Intelligence plus character - that is the goal of true education.
— Martin Luther King, Jr.