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Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 11)
Hey there! MapleWay here with a review! Wow. This was quite an ending. Cortez finally got what he deserved. What's funny is that if this happened in the first couple ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: All I Have
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a cool little piece! I really enjoyed reading it! My favorite part of it was not the story you told ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: When Does My Existence Begin?
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! (Also I know I technically already reviewed this but I thought I would redo it because it wasn't long enough! Also, it's ...
Mar 21, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 10)
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a nice extension of your story! I liked how you keep developing Cortez's story and personality even further in each ...
Mar 21, 2021 -
Re: The Wolf- Chapter 2: Home
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a cool extension of your story! I helped develop the situation more and was overall amusing. My favorite part by ...
Mar 21, 2021 -
Re: PERSEPHONE
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a cool poem! I loved all of the clear imagery you used as well! It helped print such a clear ...
Mar 20, 2021 -
Re: hill blocks view
Hey there! MapleWay here with a short review! Wow. I'm not sure if this poem is about anxiety or simply a car driving over some hills. But either way, it ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: Tired Heros & Irritated Sidekicks
Hey there! MapleWay here with a review! This was a cool little piece! Very grabbing and humorous! Before I start the review I wanted to say that you should definitely ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 9)
Hey there! MapleWay here with a review! This was a very interesting next chapter. We learn more about life for Cortez and even life for Shayene. Cortez can't even go ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: The Ghost of Time
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a cool little poem! It had a lot of repetition which I ended up liking a lot in the end! ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: we are lost at sea, lost in our own minds
Hey there! MapleWay here with a review! This was an outstanding poem! The words just seemed to flow so well! I also wanted to quickly mention how amazing your title ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: The Frosted Window
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a great poem! It does an outstanding job bringing hope to the reader. (I might come back and look at ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: The journey of life
Hey there! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a cool little poem about life! I liked how you used all of the causes and effects! The rhymes were ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 8)
Hey! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a nice installment of your story! I feel it was a little short compared to your other chapters and was a ...
Mar 15, 2021 -
Re: Unwanted
Hey! MapleWay here with a quick review! This was a beautiful poem. The word flowed perfectly. And on the part where you talked about the note in the desk drawer. ...
Mar 15, 2021