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Re: Impulsive Tattoos
Hello! I am Maddy and I'm here to review! The subject of this poem is wonderful. It's interesting, which is perfect! However, the rhyming kinda made the poem hard to ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: How Much Longer?
Hi! I'm Maddy and I'm here to review for you :3 First; This is a fantastic piece. Easy to relate to, easy to read, easy to picture a writer going ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: The first time
Hello! I'm Maddy and I'm here to give you a review! This poem has an extremely good idea to it. I think tha all you need to do to fix ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Untold Feelings
Hello! I'm Maddy, and I'm here to give you a review! This piece is absolutely wonderful. I can relate to it perfectly, yet it feels so original. You took a ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Beauty Errupts
Hi, misstoria I'm Maddy and I'm here to give you a review! There's just something about this poem that caught my attention. I think your word choice really pulled me ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Cut Deep
This piece is really deep. It's a topic that many consider dark, disturbing, something that should be kept private. I disagree with those people. I believe this kind of peotry ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Why?
One thing i enjoy about this poem is the way it is set up. I think that you should have tried this set up with a more original topic, one ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: The beauty of Night
I love the topic of this poem. Night is an extremely beautiful thing, and not many people can see that. I'm glad you can capture it with your words. My ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: It's okay to cry
This is really short, but it gets the point across. I really love the way you make it seem so short and simple, yet get a story across at the ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Leave Me Alone
Hello, I'm rather confused as to why you deleted this. think you should just edit it a little bit. Trust me, if you feel like people are being to "criticizey" ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Run
First off, I like the name of the professor. Pro. Blem. It made me laugh a little bit. I also really enjoy the plot of this story. The sequence of ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: The Tree
The concept of this story is great. It's interesting and more than a little compelling. The word choice threw me off a little bit. There were some un-needed, extremely long ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: about tonight
This is really good free verse. I think you should try to make it into a rhyming poem, because they seem to have a bigger impact on a lot of ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Brand New Eyes
This poem kinda confused me. I don't understand what it means. It first starts off by talking about looking into someone's eyes, knowing they'd never lie to you. then, it ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Fishing
I love this. This is really a great piece of work and I hope you post a lot more like it. I love the way you describe the girls death, ...
Jan 6, 2013
