This reminded me so much of my ex boyfriend wow. (He cheated on me and was very controlling now that I think about it. ) Anyway.
I really felt this poem. I felt this pain before. I know this feeling very well.
I love how you said stuff then asked questions. I loved this. Oh my gosh.
My favorite line is "Why didn't you take a chance?"
That line hit me and I loved it. Cause like it made me think. Why didn't my ex take a chance? Why didn't he ever hold my hand. I read this from my point of view. Although I know it was yours and you went through this. (I went through the same like I said). But seriously good job I really liked this.
Overall great job and thank you for being so real in this. Nice.
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