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Re: My Heart is Not a Game
Hey! I'd love to review this. It's pretty interesting and a good read! I hope I'm not too critical in my review. Starting off, I like the beginning. It's to ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: How do you?
Hey, Gem, here's that review! It's great! I like the idea behind the poem, and how it's written as a series of questions! And initially I was confused by the ...
Dec 3, 2019 -
Re: Hidden Heir(Prologue)
Hey! So I just thought I'd pop in a quick review. It's very interesting, and I'm glad to see how you've progressed your story. Good work! The only errors I ...
Dec 1, 2019 -
Re: Shadow Story (Vol. 1)
Hmm, this is is interesting. I liked my first read, and the title was pretty catchy too. Overall it's a good read. Before I carry on, though, my apologies if ...
Nov 29, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 12
Here's that review I promised! Sorry for taking so long. Starting off, the chapter is really interesting! I enjoyed reading it, and I hope to see what happens next. The ...
Nov 26, 2019 -
Re: A Poets Sacrifice
Hey Gem, Lee's here for a review! So, firstly, I enjoyed the poem quite a lot. I read through it a few times, and each time I felt more of ...
Nov 15, 2019 -
Re: flowers 1.1
Hey, Little's here to review! Starting off, I enjoy the whole concept behind the poem. It reminds of the dramatic monologue, a style I'm very fond of. And I love ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: House
Hey there, Lee's here for a review!!! Firstly, I'd like to start by saying that the story is pretty interesting, although the opening is a little random. I won't talk ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: Droplets
Hey there, Lee's here for a review! Starting off, I LOVE how you've have made the entire poem structure shaped like one droplet. It's awesome! I could not completely understand ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: silver neck
Hey there, LordWolf! Love the name! Lee's here for a review! Starting off, to be absolutely honest, it feels a little like a narrative story or monologue rather than a ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: fifty cents for the pink pony
Hey, Little's here for a review! Starting off with the negatives, there are a few grammatical errors. You've fragmented multiple sentences unnecessarily... So be careful of your use of commas! ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: hell's angel
Little's here for a review! Well, you got me wanting to read your book! I enjoyed this poem... It has many different levels, whether that was intentional or not. To ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: The Attributes of Life
Hey there, Little's here for a review! It's been a while, really... Starting off, I enjoy the topic. I also got this really unexplainable but nice feeling when reading the ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Ask Me This
Hey there! Little's here for a review! It's been a long time since i did this, so forgive me for any errors! Starting off, I can understand how you may ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Festival Thoughts
Hey, Little's here for a review!! I haven't done this in ages, so forgive me if I blunder a bit! Starting off, I really like the topic that you chose. ...
Dec 2, 2018
