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Hey there, LordWolf! Love the name!
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Lee's here for a review!
Starting off, to be absolutely honest, it feels a little like a narrative story or monologue rather than a poem. BUT the poem is breathtaking. I didn't particularly like the first and third stanzas ( I feel like they could have been tweaked a bit and made better) but the rest of it is absolutely wonderful. Honestly, I don't know what you wrote this for (*winces) but I connected with it fairly well.
Love the last line. I want to steal it(
Well, I really have nothing to say! This shows a flair for poetry, but can be adjusted here and there to sound better. Otherwise, all's good.
Congratulations!
Honestly I don't see anything and it is very disappointing. No offense but don't post anything if you don't write anything. Maybe that's why no one is bothering to post a review for you. I mean if you at least write 4 sentences that would be good. Also if you need help just say you do. I really think you have potential you just need to unlock it and that is something your not doing right now.
There is a poem posted here.
It's just an image because of specific formatting and this work has successfully been viewed by multiple people.
If you're having trouble viewing the image of a poem, sorry for the technical issue but there's no need to address me in this manner.
Might be a site bug so perhaps report it in the Report a Site Bug thread that Nate has posted.
Your right and I am very sorry I didn't know that please forgive me