LayLay2013

Hi Laylay here and amazing work. I love the creativity when you wrote this line: oN! tUP TI KCAB! I was really impressed. Put the words backward did make me ...

WOW! The brutal opening scene where the soldier gets peppered by kinetic rounds and uses that two-stage shell to blast through Ionite armor is an incredibly intense way to drop ...

I thought u were going to say (And The Day I Miss The Most *was when i was a baby) But wow that was a surprise. Before I say anything, ...

This is an amazingly STRONG story FR! The love surrounding the "bluvaris spill" is just WOOOOOOOOOOOW! It adds fascinating word build, and the mechanical, don't even get me started! Towering ...

This poem captures the heavy, exhausting reality of emotional despair. I feel your pain. It must have been hard to express yourself, but I am happy you were strong enough ...

Okay for all the other review I wrote about me being able to relate to the poem. The one I can't lie I made a poem so similar. I introverted ...

Okay I just want to point out before I bring in my real review (Seven, right, nine) did you mean (Seven, *eight*, nine) I read your poem, and wow the ...

3. Is so for real (fr) like whenever my characters boyfriend or girlfriend dies like i always make then come back to life. Is it just me. 4. So true. ...

Are you getting abused! Sorry but my parents said if I ever see a sign I should always ask. My sign (I couldn't breathe when I was with you. /But ...

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Wow just wow! I read that five time like I was reading a speech LOL! I even read it out loud so my brother could hear it. I told him ...

o_o GET OUT! WOW!!! This is such a good short story. This is the type of stuff I have been missing out on. I need to read mor supernatural stuff. ...

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It makes sense why you’d want that word gone, especially since we’re talking about things that are heavy, real, and definitely not a joke. This poem by the stranger is ...

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I. Themes of Deception and Royal Isolation The story begins by establishing a sharp contrast between the "extravagant" world of the Winston family and the "secrets deeper than anybody could ...

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This is a hauntingly beautiful piece of fanfiction (or original fiction with deep atmospheric roots) that explores the themes of guilt, the supernatural, and the desperate lies we tell to ...