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~Eli
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This work seems fastinating! I shall have a dive at this work from a peculiar bug creature...
The pattern of the amount of 'z's is 2, 2, 3, 6, 3, 5. This is clearly in relation to how many letters are in the words that are being communicated. If we apply this to the whole poem, it becomes...
2, 2, 3, 6, 3, 5
2, 5, 4, 4, 2, 5, 5
2, 3, 1, 4, 3
2.
It's interesting how we can see a rhyme scheme here, especially with all the lines starting with a b followed by 2 'z's. This clearly indicates that these must all be the same word, but what word could it bee? (haha, that was a typo but what a punny typo; im keeping it.)
From my analysis as a psychology major, who dabbled in watching ants crawl as a kid (riveting childhood i know), I think that this has to do with the mental downward spiral that this bug, whatever bug it may be, is experiencing.
I can't really give feedback on grammar because... well, i don't speak bug. However, I can feel the emotions from this piece.
Anyways, here's my attempt to decipher this poem with my totally flawless method(s):
method 1: treat each bzz like a letter
This would result in
b, b, c, f, c, e
b, e, d, d, b, e, e
b, c, a, d, c
b.
Okay, so... this doesn't give much information. However, if we do a ceasar shift: the closest to cohesiveness we get is:
I don't think this is correct...
method 2: each 'z' is the amount of letters in a word
By reconstructing this way, and with a heap of creative liberties, this is as best as I could do:
This is clearly a poem about a bee's eternal struggle to work for its queen that bears into fruition nothing but futility and the end of it's life for the greater good. Quite deep considering a bug wrote it.
I think this isn't the most accurate, but it was fun to try and decipher what hidden meaning was here. Anyways, this review is super late but I think it was fun to look back at the buggy takeover and see the works that came out of it.
Toasty... you NERD T-T
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What a lovely poem! You can basically sing it it all rhymes so well!
The story it tells, oh! What a a masterpiece!
(If anyone speaks bee please.. translate for me?)
It is a most wonderful poem about bug superiority.
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This piece is incredibly compelling, the repetition, the sound-devices, the message within. I find pieces like this are the type one can return to again and again like a jar of sweet jam for a piece of toast. I hope to enjoy finding much more of your wonderful poetry on this website and will be recommending to all of my friends this website and poem as well. Thank you indeed for sharing.
Her Majesty, The Queen of Bugs
Beauty of this piece leaves my soul full of love for our bug friends. Simple but true, told in small words with big meaning - this piece will surely get it's golden spotlight in my heart.
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This is so beautiful. While reading this I cried so hard I shriveled up into a raisen.
“Bzz.” Was such a beautiful line and when I read this I exploded 4,000,000 times and destroyed the moon because of how absolutely jaw droppingly poetic this was.
This is better than any piece of literature ever written in all of history.
This deserves a film adaptation starring Nicholas Cage.
!0/10 I died and came back to life due to the beauty.
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