tHE WORLD IS uPSIDE-dOWN
iS THIS HOW YOU FEEL LIKE WHEN YOU DROWN
nOTHING IS RIGHT
mAYBE SOMEBODY TURNED OFF THE LIGHT?
uPPERCASE IS LOWERCASE
aND LOWERCASE IS UPPERCASE
wHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF EVERYTHING WENT - BACKWARDS][SDRAWKCB
oN! tUP TI KCAB! ][ i'M IN THE LETTER THAT JUST GOT SENT
wOULD YOU MIND HELPING
iS THAT EVEN A THING?
tHE BACK IS THE FRONT AND THE FRONT IS THE REAR-
gET ME OUT OF HERE!
sTEPPING ON THE CEILING
iS THAT THERE A WEDDING...?
tHE HUSBAND IN THE WHITE DRESS, THE BRIDE IN THE SUIT
gUESS IT'S THEIR OWN FREEDOM - THE CROWD IS MUTE
sCREAMING VOICES: IT'S THE BIRDS
mY FRIEND IS CHIRPPING IN ONE OF THE HERDS
sPINNING sPINNING sPINNING i DON'T LIKE THIS
sPINNING sPINNING EVERYTHING'S A HISS...
aAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH...
Wha - ?
Guess I'm back.
Huh. But - now there's a lack
How can I, after all this, be
Without the extraordinary?
I guess I'll just have to
Write books.
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Hi Laylay here and amazing work. I love the creativity when you wrote this line: oN! tUP TI KCAB!
I was really impressed. Put the words backward did make me struggle a bit but once I understood I was dumb founded. This was creative once again haven't seen something like this since slicing.
I feel like i am stepping into that upside-down world you described—where nothing is quite as expected, but everything is strangely exciting. One moment you’re grounded, the next you’re walking on the ceiling of possibility. Sure, it’s disorienting, like someone flipped the lights or swapped the rules, but that’s part of the thrill. Here’s to embracing the backward, the sideways, and the completely unexpected—because in this new chapter, the weird twists might just be where the magic happens. *sorry if that made no sense it sounded better in my head lol*
Yaaaay thank you for the review!!! It does make sense, that was what I was trying to say - but much better described
Thanks again!
Hi. Elias here for a short review. I think.
Woah. I was so confused at the start. But I kind of get that feeling. I like the rhyme scheme in the beginning, and how it changes. Like, it goes
a
a
b
b
c
c
d
d
and so on, but then it suddenly stops rhyming when you reach the part where you start typing normally again.
I really liked this part:
I struggled on it for a full 5 minutes, ngl, but then I deciphered it. I liked where it said "Put it back!" although, there is a typo in backwards spelled backwards, it would be sdrawkcab, not sdrawkcb because that spells bckwards. missing an A ^^.
Overall I really enjoyed this poem, it made me laugh. Keep it up!!
- Insanity
Yaaaaay thanks for the review!!! Also ty for noticing the typo, I'm going to change it - and oc for taking the time to make this review! q(%u2267%u25BD%u2266q)
oh sorry that last part didn't go through well...
I'm giggling