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Hey there ! I really think this is a heartfelt and powerful poem; of which , I can definitely empathise with. Your use of language is really effective - like ...

Hi there! I really like your style and how you've described certain things using so many techniques and adjectives, and the way you've set it out in stanzas is just ...

Hi there! I really like how descriptive you are - using lots of adjectives and similes - I like the one about the nest of serpents .. That's really powerful ...

Hi there , I really like the way you've written this poem actually - it's direct and straight to the point when telling us how the person feels .. And ...

Hi there! To start with, I believe the title is really cool because it is quite simplistic yet intriguing - which is why I clicked on this to start with. ...

This is really awesomee! I like the way in which you've used similes like the one about the kiss or the bugs to create imagery. I think that's really creative ...

Hey there, I've never really been interested in Marvel but you've actually made me change my mind xD .. This seems really interesting and I love the whole mystery on ...

Hey there! I just wanted to say, this is really awesome. You're so eloquent in how you've described the mattress as a {cloud folded beneath you} , that really created ...

Hi there! I think this is a really lovely song and I admire how personal it is - and quite relatable as I can't dance myself xD. I really like ...

Hi there! First of all, the title instantly drew me in to read this poem and I'm glad I did because although it is quite short, that is all that ...

Hello, this is a really interesting and good poem. I like the way in which you've been so direct in describing how you feel - almost concisely saying how it ...

I really like this and how dramatic you've made this seem. As soon as I saw the title, I was drawn in because it was so concise yet so intriguing ...

I've never watched anime or read any novels of it but I really like what you've written here. I like how you've used description in this prologue, allowing the plot ...

This is awesome! It's so powerful the way in which you've described the dark so creatively with similes, personification, and so many other techniques. I really like the fact it's ...

Your use of language is amazing. I really love the part where you say about the entity [spitting only light] and how it [cleansed the forests] etc. This is really ...