Laure

Oh, this is so beautiful and heart felt. *sniffs* The rhythm in this poem made it an easy poem to read and inflows really well. And I love, just absolutely ...

This is really beautiful, you've put five haikus together into one giant haiku and it all flows smoothly. I don't usually find faults with personal and beautiful poems like this ...

*claps* Hullo, thy king! This humble little miss is here for a review! Wow, this is such a contrast to my short story, 'stencilled Whiteness' and the thing is what ...

Wow, look at the beautiful but sad imagery and mood you've set here. This is a very well written poem but... waiting is the worst torture Usually we start each ...

Hey viv, allow me to have the honour of the first review. :D *curtseys* I don't usually review on short stories, so excuse my poor reviewing skills. This is a ...

This is a very beautiful poem with wonderful imagery. The first three lines: The Autumn moon hung brightly shining, through the blue-black sky, I saw him with his sister stars, ...

Oh wow, this is brilliant. What you've written is very powerful and truthful and I doubt few people would have had the courage to write it. Is true the, when ...

This is probably the most unique poem about life I've read, and a somewhat positive one. Is a beautiful comparison of life and nautical adventures. Seriously, I don't even know ...

You know, I don't read much short stories because they bore me to death but I guess after reading yours I should review my opinions on them because this was ...

I really like the style of this poem, is very simple yet it paints a beautiful imagery of summer. There really isn't any grammatical mistakes except you should have used ...

Hey SuperMittens, Laure here for a review. Hm, this is a certainly interesting poem. Perhaps some punctuation would have help you to convey the message better. Is a short poem, ...

This is a very interesting poem. Is very touching and sad, but so beautiful at the same time. I couldn't really find fault with this so I will just say ...

Nice, I love haikus, though I suck at writing them. But you wrote it really well, I think what makes this piece so beautiful yet powerfull at the same time. ...

*claps* Nice, very nice. The imagery in this poem is amazing and you have captured the exact nature of the knife and your feelings exactly right. I like how you ...

This poem is beautiful. Truly, is a complete gem. The poem flows with a constant and easy rhythm that instantly drew me in. Nothing kills a poem like terrible rhythm ...