LadySpark

Hello dear! Spark here to review! First of all, I'm a fellow One Direction Fan. (And avid Larry shipper, I have to admit,) So I must say that I was ...

Hullo there! Spark, here to review! :) So first off I notice that you don't have any periods. And that's sad, because periods need homes too! Since you're using commas, ...

Hello dear! I'm here to review you today. So first of, I have to say that you seem really restricted in the poetry format you've selected. It's choppy, it doesn't ...

Hello, lucky dear. Here to review! So, this is a nice little song. Though, I'm not sure if it's really as song as much as it is a poem. You ...

Hi Lylas, here as requested :3 f ight for me, fight for you, fight for us. Little redundant, don't you think? Try expanding your words so that you can makes ...

Hello! Here to review! :) Salty wet sand, Melts between my toes, Whilst far across the land, My dreams and hopes impose. Fluttering from tree to tree, They flicker across ...

Hello dear! Here to review! Well, first off, this is adorable. But very... cliche? No, not cliche. I don't even know what it is. But I do know that I ...

Hello dear! Aw, this was cute. But we've got some technicalities that could really be fixed. Ugliar Babe, it's Uglier. in sixth grade you are the best if you have ...

Hello! So first off, I notice that you've chosen to keep everything lower case, and I don't know if it was a style choice or you're just to lazy to ...

Hello there! Here to review! First off, I'm not a big fan of things written without punctuation. It's just not my style. But I really liked this. Just a few ...

I think what you have as the first line is actually supposed to be the title, so if I were you, I'd separate it. and ' o so hard. kiss ...

Hi dear! :) The earth will end. We will cease. No more of anything. And tonight I find my brain in a place that shouldn't matter because I don't believe ...

Hello dear! Here to review. So... okay, formatting. I see below that you lost your format, so I'll help you with that! :) When finding our love was as important ...

Hello darling! Here to review ;) I didn’t know it would be crying, What would be crying? This part is kind of confusing, cause you haven't referenced where the rain ...

much different than the gloom and darkness that loomed inside the hut ahead. >>She crouched to get her tall form under the low doorway and kissed her sleeping little girl's ...